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    to keep it safe i locked it away
    nothing could penetrate the walls of my heart...
    but the sorrow dripped in and filled it up
    the lock was faulty from the start...

    nothing to lose
    nothing to steal
    nothing in, nothing out
    so afraid to feel...

    until the time
    i cracked open the door
    and the sorrow inside
    began to pour...

    and an ocean poured out
    around the island of my heart
    and i cried as i felt
    the walls of my heart tear apart...

    putting hope in things non existent
    never foreseeing the fall
    surprised when i find
    there was nothing there at all...

    the brilliant glimmer of hope
    i see twinkle like a star
    with no possibility of contact
    for the distance is too far...

    i try to retreat from this island i made
    and i close my eyes and charge into it again...
    and the ocean of sadness filled my lungs
    i know ill drown...i never learned to swim
    in my head theres a greyhound station, where i send my thoughts to far off destinations.... so they may have a chance of finding a place, thats far more suited than here (ben gibbard)

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    Lovely poem , i just loved each and ever line of it , its really expressive and well imagined.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by polaris1 View Post
    to keep it safe i locked it away
    nothing could penetrate the walls of my heart...
    but the sorrow dripped in and filled it up
    the lock was faulty from the start...

    nothing to lose
    nothing to steal
    nothing in, nothing out
    so afraid to feel...

    until the time
    i cracked open the door
    and the sorrow inside
    began to pour...

    and an ocean poured out
    around the island of my heart
    and i cried as i felt
    the walls of my heart tear apart...

    putting hope in things non existent
    never foreseeing the fall
    surprised when i find
    there was nothing there at all...

    the brilliant glimmer of hope
    i see twinkle like a star
    with no possibility of contact
    for the distance is too far...

    i try to retreat from this island i made
    and i close my eyes and charge into it again...
    and the ocean of sadness filled my lungs
    i know ill drown...i never learned to swim
    Such a lovely poem. I wish I could write something this good. ^.^

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    Dude, stop writing! Ur songs so pwn mine!! xD just messin, good work.

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