Hm, the information carried over from old submissions seems strange here.
-The submitted title "Majo de Choi" is actually incorrect - the original was intended to be 魔法でチョイ˛ (which should at least turn into 魔法でチョイ2 in places that don't know how to unicode ^2). I have no idea why "Mahou" turned into "Majo" (nor do I understand why the series slug is "ojamahoudoremi", but that might be a harder issue to correct). The '2' is actually significant and should probably be retained in some way, be it by inserting the number or repeating 'Choi'.
-The credits seem to have been copy/pasted from "LUPINUS no Komoriuta" from the same series. The correct credits are as follows:
Code:
Vocals: Gojou Mayumi
Lyrics / Composition: Matsubara Miki
Arrangement: MT-DRIVE
Also, I noticed there are still some issues with the romaji post-revision.
Verse 2 line 4:
moucho no kimochi choito kowai?!
→ mouchou no [...]
Verse 3 line 2:
tabesaseru oya ga wananna~i
→ [...] ga wakanna~i
Verse 4 line 1:
"Pirika pirirara" to mahou de choichoi “
// remove stray quotation mark
Verse 6 line 1:
[hanashi wo kiite!] to iitemo "ato de!" to
→ [...] to ittemo [...]
Verse 7 line 2:
tabesaseru oya ga wananna~i
→ [...] ga wakanna~i
Verse 8 line 1:
[hanashi wo kiite!] to iitemo "ato de!" to
→ [...] to ittemo [...]
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