Some small corrections:
1st stanza-
ano hi kimi ni deaeta sono toki kara
toumei no chi ga bokura futari ni kayoi
kanashimi mo yasashisa mo kibou mo mata zetsubou mo
wakaaeru you ni natta
4th, 9th, 14th and 17th stanzas-
Furawaawooru (the "sou" is not needed this line anywhere in the song)
7th stanza-
kono amari ni hiroi sekai de bokutachi wa
imi mo naku onaji basho ni tatteita no ni
boku no kaketa tokoro to kimi no kaketa tokoro [wo]<---not needed
nazeka otagai ni motteita
8th stanza-
doushite bokura wa
meguriaeta no ka
sono tame dake ni
umaretekita you na
10th stanza-
hitori de wa
katazukerarenai mono darou to
kimi ga ite kuretara hora
kagirinai zetsubou mo kotae ga dasenai toi mo zenbu
hitotsu zutsu irozuiteiku
11th stanza-
hanasenainda moshimo te wo hanaseba
nido to tsukamenai you na ki ga shite
19th stanza-
sore wo bokura wa unmei to yobinagara
itsumademo te wo tsunaideita
Also this is more of a suggestion but wouldn't it be better if the original title was stylized simply as "Flowerwall", as it seems to be the official title?
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