FMP Fumoffu - Kimi ni Fuku Kaze

[cmertb]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ful...nifukukaze.htm

There are several issues in the romaji transliteration, so I just redid it. Here are the kanji lyrics for reference: http://music.goo.ne.jp/lyric/LYRUTND70152/index.html

As well as a video with lyrics to check the pronunciation:


I'll translate this based on the corrected lyrics.

Hashiridasu shunkan sakamichi de kaze ni naru
Yakitsuketa hizashi ga mune no oku atsuku shita

Ah- Kimi ni chikazuite iku tabi hayaku naru
Toki wo kakeru hajimari no yokan saseru manazashi ga suki

Chiisana ai de ii itsumo soba de atarimae no jikan
Kyou dekiru koto wa konna fuu ni nanigenai koto de
Kimi ga furimuku you ni mijikaku kitta kami ga yurete
Mata hitotsu fueru waraigoe sora ni hibiite iku

Yasashisa ni amaete sukoshi dake kizutsuita
Utsuri yuku kisetsu ni mata futari musubareru

Ah- Konna shunkan wo shiawase to yobetara
Mitsumeatte kono machi de deaeta kiseki wo kanjiteru

Toomawari shite kaerou kimo to mou sukoshi arukitai
Nanimo nai hi koso soba ni ite kaze ni naretara
Kumo no kirema ni todokisou da ne onaji sora wo miage
Sono hitomi ni utsushita asu mo kou shite sugoshitai

Ah- Kyou mo tenohira ni noru you na yorokobi ga
Afureru kara "arigatou" yasashiku naritai kimi no tame

Chiisana ai de ii itsumo soba de atarimae no jikan
Kyou dekiru koto wa konna fuu ni nanigenai koto de
Kimi ga furimuku you ni mijikaku kitta kami ga yurete
Mata hitotsu fueru waraigoe sora ni hibiite iku

[AzureDark]

ooh this is that Santana+Michelle Branch soundalike song...

Uh, no, you need to point out exactly what's wrong with it...

mmm I doubt we can reach mink-sempai anymore (I swear this already had a trans by her, wonder where it went...) so I guess I should replace it since I saw enough mistakes.

[cmertb]

So just to be clear, for next time you need all the exact mistakes in the romaji marked?

Also, embarrassingly enough, I just noticed a typo in my transliteration: The line "Toomawari shite kaerou kimo to mou sukoshi arukitai" -> "Toomawari shite kaerou kimi to mou sukoshi arukitai"

[animeyay]

So just to be clear, for next time you need all the exact mistakes in the romaji marked?

That would be lovely. Bold them, underline them, use a different font color, etc., just so long we can tell exactly what the mistakes/corrections are.

[cmertb]

I edited my last post while you were typing, please note the correction there.

On a different subject, how do you get the AL Lyrics: ### line in your profile?

[animeyay]

Haha, it's ok, I make typos literally alllll the time.

Uh, the system automatically does that for us. I think you just need to wait for some time for the system to update your profile? I'm not 100% sure though.