Snow rain - Kana Ueda

[fMegrez]

There are some minor but significant errors in the translation: はなれえぬ is used in the negative sense (since -ぬ is essentially equivalent to -ない), but the translation apparently missed this point.

In addition, it makes more sense to translate 祝福の風 as "the wind granting benediction" but not "the blessed wind."

With these in mind, I would like to correct part of its translation.

Original:

The wish of the blessed wind
Is unrequited love

New:

Embodied with its wish, the wind carries its benediction
towards the everlasting bond far, far away

Original:

The road of the blessed wind
Go onwards with a smile

New:

In the journey, amidst the wind granting its benediction,
I go onwards with a smile

[EJTranslations]

There are some minor but significant errors in the translation: はなれえぬ is used in the negative sense (since -ぬ is essentially equivalent to -ない), but the translation apparently missed this point.

In addition, it makes more sense to translate 祝福の風 as "the wind granting benediction" but not "the blessed wind."

With these in mind, I would like to correct part of its translation.

Original:

The wish of the blessed wind
Is unrequited love

New:

Embodied with its wish, the wind carries its benediction
towards the everlasting bond far, far away

Original:

The road of the blessed wind
Go onwards with a smile

New:

In the journey, amidst the wind granting its benediction,
I go onwards with a smile

Thanks! Can you link me to the lyrics page?