I'm attempting this song, and I'd love to get feedback on how it looks. Thanks in advance! (:
The turqoise blue night
Exists (just) for us
>Not sure if I should just leave the 'just' out, since the kanji pretty much says 'Exists for us'.
Don't read too much into it
Just enjoy the art of life
Mister DJ the rythm of this song is nice
Turn it up more turn it, turn it up more
Sexy lady your backless dress
suits you well- you're number one!
Celebrate bathed in light
If we dive into the sea of green, we can be anything
Celebrate pop open the Dom Perignon
When I'm dyed in gold down to my lungs, I feel like a queen
>Most puzzled about this line- I'm not quite sure if I've got it right.
The beast held in your gentle eyes awakens
Mister DJ the rhythm of this song is nice
Turn it up more turn it, turn it up more
Sexy lady your backless dress
suits you well- you're number one!
Celebrate on a hill where you can see the moon
Let's make our vows tonight- a secret wedding
Celebrate come over here
Because I understand what it's like to have always been crying alone
>Structure seems a little awkward, not sure if I've got it right.
Stop time
Celebrate bathed in light
If we dive into the sea of green, we can be anything
Celebrate pop open the Dom Perignon
When I'm dyed in gold down to my lungs, I feel like a queen
Ah I love the way
You make me feel the music
Ah it's strange, isn't it? Even though it can't be touched, we feel it.
>I feel like using some other word, like 'marvelous', but I'm not sure if it'd sit well. Strange just feels a little...flat.
Kanji:
ターコイズブルーの夜
ぼくたちのためにある
深読みなんかしないで
Just enjoy the art of life
Mister DJ この歌調子いいね
もっとあげて もっともっとあげて
Sexy lady 背中のあいた dress
似合ってるね おまえがナンバーワンだぜ
Celebrate 光を浴びて
緑の海に飛び込んだら なんにでもなれる
Celebrate ドンペリ開けて
肺までゴールドに染まったら 女王様気分
優しい瞳を持つ化け物が目を覚ます
Mister DJ この歌調子いいね
もっとあげて もっともっとあげて
Sexy lady 背中のあいた dress
似合ってるね おまえがナンバーワンだぜ
Celebrate 月の見える丘で
今夜二人で誓い合うよ 秘密のウェディング
Celebrate こっちへおいで
ずっと一人で泣いてたこと分かってるから
時間を止めて
Celebrate 光を浴びて
緑の海に飛び込んだら なんにでもなれる
Celebrate ドンペリ開けて
肺までゴールドに染まったら 女王様気分
Ah I love the way
You make me feel the music
Ah 不思議ね 触れていないのに感じる
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