Test failed for no reason at all

[andromedashun81]

OK I'm calming myself down when I write this. I don't care if I get banned or not since I rarely visit this site but...

I took around 3 hours to take the Japanese test on this site. The original text is below:

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So now, what the heck is wrong with my translation??? I'm really pissed but getting reject for no reason at all makes me furious. What is wrong with the admins of this site???

[Kaitou Ace]

Ah this is really something for @AzureDark or @animeyay to take a look at

[animeyay]

I don't remember grading this one, so AzureDark probably did, but I see several major problems:

- you can't just leave "naname" untranslated
- 思いっきり ≠ revolution
- "It seems he will lose" has the wrong subject
- ココロ立ち位置 ≠ "Station Kokoro"
- 知らないうちに ≠ "unknown house"

Also, some of your sentences are kinda awkward. "I want to do love you know" or "I'm fully aware of something hard to deal with yesterday" don't exactly have the best sentence structures.

One last thing is that you translated the sentences line by line, disregarding the context, so your translation seemed very disconnected and disorganized. Remember, this is a real song, so all sentences should combine into a clear-thought paragraph, not just a collection of loosely translated sentences that don't seem to have much to do with one another.

We, or I at least, generally allow 2 errors/problems, so any more than that would result in a fail.

P.S. To the mod: this thread should probably be deleted or modified after this problem is resolved so that future test takers couldn't cheat off this thread.

[Kaitou Ace]

@animeyay sure thing, just say when

[AzureDark]

I love the "unknown house" part. Soon as I see any "house" in these tests I give a straight fail.

[animeyay]

@Kaitou Ace
It's been a week, and OP has yet to respond, so I think for the time being we can assume he's no longer pursuing the subject matter. Is it possible to at least remove the content of his post (the original Japanese test along with his translation)? We can leave the thread open in case he suddenly wants to return and make comments.

[Kaitou Ace]

@animeyay And done