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    Default Correction for World End

    Link to animelyrics site for this song: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/cod...2/worldend.htm

    In the last line of the song, "ima kaze no naka" should be " ima kaze ni narou" (this is how it's sung in the original song). This means the translated lyrics also need to change, from "we will be pure white, now in the wind" to "let's become pure white, now in the wind"

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    Thanks! I've fixed the transliteration. As for the translation, it looks more like it should be "now, let's become a pure white wind" to me--what do you think?

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    Default Re: Correction for World End

    Your translation works fine, bluepenguin, but I just wanted to keep it consistent with the rest of the song, since "now in the wind" is repeated several times.

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    Default Re: Correction for World End

    I'm all for consistency, I just feel that "now let's become pure white, in the wind" vs. "now let's become a pure white wind" is a more significant change in meaning than I would really feel comfortable making for artistic license.

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