ISSA - JUSTIPHI (OST Kamen Rider 555)

[Haqiem E.]

is this correct??
please help..

Hirogaru uchuuno naka Can you feel?
Chiisa na hoshino hanashio shiyo

Tell me the truth shinjiteta mi raiga
Kuzure sarou to shiteru

Kanashimi wo kurikaeshi
Boku-ra wa doko e yuku no darou?

Ima hitori-hitori no mune no naka
Me wo samase The time to go
Tsuyoku aru tame ni
Mata mamoru koto to tatakau koto
Dilemma wa owaranai... hashiri-tsuzukete mo
End justifaiz the means

Ashita no kono sora sae Keep your real
Eien ja nai kamo shirenai

Over again messeeji wo okuru
Byouyomi wa hajimatta...

Boku-ra ni wa mada kitto
Yaru beki koto ga aru no nara...

Ima hitori-hitori no mune no naka
Yobisamase The way you go
Shinjitsu wo sagase
Mata shinjiru koto utagau koto
Dilemma wa kiri ga nai... samayoi-tsuzukeru
End justifaiz the means

Kanashimi wo kurikaeshi
Boku-ra wa doko e yuku no darou?

Ima hitori-hitori no mune no naka
Me wo samase The time to go
Tsuyoku aru tame ni
Mata mamoru koto to tatakau koto
Dilemma wa owaranai... hashiri-tsuzukete mo
End justifaiz the means

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[EJTranslations]

It would help if you could post the kanji lyrics also. I can see a couple things that might be mistakes, but can't be 100% sure without referencing the kanji.

[Haqiem E.]

but im not good in japanese bro, maybe you can help for this...

[Rei]

Here's the kanji: http://www.kasi-time.com/item-21360.html

For the most part it looks okay, it just needs some adjustment here and there.

[EJTranslations]

Just a few things:

>hanashio shiyo
hanashi wo shiyou

>shinjiteta mi raiga
shinjiteta mirai ga

Also, with "uchuuno" and "hoshino", you've stuck the particles onto the preceding word. That's not wrong, but if you're going to do it you need to do it consistently, or else you need to consistently put a space between the word and the particle as you do in the rest of the song. Considering that you've got the particles mostly spaced, it would probably be easier just to do "uchuu no" and "hoshi no" and leave the rest as-is.

[Haqiem E.]

oww, that would help me, arigatou nii-san...