Tenpei Sato - Battle Comrade

[burningsteel]

http://www.animelyrics.com/game/disg...nyuutomoyo.htm

Song repeats lyrics once.
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戦いに身を捧げ
愛さえも捨て去り
信じるのは己が牙だけ
あぁ、孤独な狼

傷付ける事の悲しみ知った時
お前がそこに立っていた

冷え切った心に熱い風が翔る
あぁ背中合わせに語り合う友情

戦士に許されたたった一つのもの
命賭して戦った仲間たち

掛け替えのない戦友（とも）よ

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tatakai ni mi wo sasage
ai sae mo sutesari
shinjiru no wa ono ga kiba dake
aa, kodukuna ookami

kizutsukeru koto no kanashimi shitta toki
omae ga soko ni tatteita

hiekitta kokoro ni atsui kaze ga kakeru
aa, senaka awase ni katariau yuujou

senshi ni yurusareta tatta hitotsu no mono
inochi kakeshite tatakatta nakamatachi

kakegae no nai senyuu (tomo) yo

[animeyay]

Are you sure those are the correct lyrics?
"Tomo" apparently is supposed to be written as 戦友 instead.

[burningsteel]

You are right. And I grouped the sections incorrectly. Fixed.

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The romanji already submitted for this song has an oddity where the submitter has these lines for "信じるのは己が牙だけ"

Shinjiru no ha Ono//re// ga Kiba dake

Could you possibly remove that "//re//", because the singer uses 己が, which is read here as 【おのが】meaning "my/one's own".

[animeyay]

Would you like to provide your complete version of the romaji instead?

[burningsteel]

Would you like to provide your complete version of the romaji instead?

Sure, I 'll add it above. I do not have any other issues with that previous romaji besides those parts though.

[animeyay]

Ok I updated the song and credited to you instead, mainly because of aesthetics.
The previous version had errors, used "ha" in place of "wa", and had too much unnecessary capitalization.

[burningsteel]

Cool, first thing from me on the site!
Gah, I had already submitted old incorrect romaji before through the normal submission area and it should be in queue, but there were some errors in the submission. Since you just put in the corrected one, how can I remove those old erroneous submissions? Then I can properly submit my corrected translation as well....

[animeyay]

Oh, those are probably in the loooooooooong secondary queue of submissions made by people who have not passed the Japanese test. It is our policy now not to approve any of those songs, so the queue only gets longer and longer everyday lol.

Why don't you just go ahead and resubmit them? Since you have passed the Japanese test, your submissions will now appear in the primary queue, which we DO check fairly frequently.