Beautiful Girl

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This poem was made during a poetry battle with my friend on facebook. We took turns pasting poetry on each other's wall. haha. Hope you guys like it ^^



Your smile like the sun,
So warm and bright
Your voice like thunder,
Ringing in my ears

Your face like a rose,
Enchantingly beautiful
Your hair like a breeze,
Flowing softly when you move

Your skin like porcelain,
So fair and smooth
Your lips like cherry,
A delicious fruit

A girl like you is hard to come by
You make my heart soar right up to the sky
I'd never want to see you cry
You got me falling the moment you said "Hi"See More

[Nanobyte]

Haha, very nice.
Seen some classical poetry, and some stuff I haven't seen before, nice mix.
I am dissapointed that the "see more" button doesn't work, haha.