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    Default My Feelings For You Unparalleled.

    Yeah,Here's Another I Wrote Some Time Ago,Again,For My Angel.



    A Feeling Came Out Of The Blue,
    It Forces My Heart To Stir,
    Finally My Mind Gains A Clue,
    And This Feeling Is No Longer Blur.

    My Feelings For You Is Undying,
    My Heart Is Forever Yours,
    With You By My Side,I Feel Like Flying,
    For Your Presence Itself Cures.

    I See Something Special In You,
    A Trait Which Only I Understand,
    I Wish For Us To Remain True,
    For I Pray For Our Love To Stand.

    What I Feel Is No Game,
    And To Express It I Feel No Shame,
    I Will Never Feel The Same,
    As I Uphold Our Loves' Name.

    My Love For You Runs Deep,
    Like A Vast,Perilous Ocean,
    Every Night I Smile As I Sleep,
    For Our Love Is A Happiness Potion.

    You Are The Blessing In My Life,
    An Unparalleled Gift Bestowed Upon Me,
    I Ask That You Stay As We Strive,
    As Our Love Has Always Been Meant To Be.

    I Grow To Learn To Love,
    As You Stand By My Side,
    Our Bond Is Like A Groove,
    Where We Can Strut Under The Moonlight.

    I Wish To Be With You For An Eternity,
    I Want Our Strong Bond To Brew,
    I Hope That We Reach Serenity,
    Truly Because I Love You.

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    Default Re: My Feelings For You Unparalleled.

    Aww this is sweet~ I hope you and your partner remain together ^^
    I'd just like to mention, I like the title hehe

    When writing, don't make every word have a capital (only the start of the sentence and pronouns).
    So instead of:

    "A Feeling Came Out Of The Blue,
    It Forces My Heart To Stir,"

    Rather have it:

    "A feeling came out of the blue,
    It forces my heart to stir,"

    Sorry if I'm being picky, it just looks more professional in that way?
    Overall it's good though, I like it~
    Hope to see more works from you! ^^
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    Default Re: My Feelings For You Unparalleled.

    Ahaha,Well...Its Kinda A Habit Of Mine To Type With Caps On The 1st Letter...Been Typing This Way For Years XP...Sorry If It Really Is Annoying XD

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    Default Re: My Feelings For You Unparalleled.

    That really is beautiful!

    I'm happy for you.


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