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    This poem is dedicated to my only Sunshine<3 ^^



    You took that light and stunned my eyes
    That light even pierced through my dark
    depths created by the demons in my closet

    Oh, those demons
    All the troubled that
    they caused. My agony
    was the cost. Who knew
    I'd have to pay in pain.

    Guess if I didn't I'd die in vain?
    Guess if I didn't I wouldn't take
    the path that ultimately led me
    to you. So all my falls, I appreciate
    each one. Because I only needed to
    be brought up once. In life we must
    fall a thousand times in order to truly
    appreciate what will make us fly.

    This light really needs to be brighter
    But you already put the sun to shame
    Look at it for too long and you'll go blind.
    But I want to only be able to look at you
    with closed eyes. To see your soul for what
    it really is. Seeing is the weakest sense.
    Why use it when I can look through a different
    lens? My gut tells me you're an angel in
    human form. Maybe it's because your smile
    warms my frost bitten heart. Maybe it's because
    your voice sends chills down my back and even
    through my arms. Not to cause you any alarm,
    but I think I'm slipping into a coma. Unless of
    course the white light I'm seeing is of your
    own making. I always knew you shined that
    bright. Your potential has always been high.
    It inspires me to take my life to new heights.
    I'm afraid of heights, but with you that's an
    fear of the past. I found my guardian, he's here
    at last. I was in need of some saving. And you
    came along to be my savior. You're responsible
    for the death of my demons. You are the reason
    I was able to leave them. You showed me that
    I deserve better. You've taught me that together,
    We can be brighter than a sun and 100 lightning
    bolts combined. Our shine makes the stars want
    to hide. Their presence is nothing compared to ours.
    I walk down a winding path of deceiving loves no
    more. All my inconsistencies washed up on shore and
    have evaporated, all thanks to you, my Sun. The only one
    that saves me from a withering state. The one that
    takes all the excessive weight on my shoulders and
    transforms it into love. All the love in the world
    could rest on my shoulders but all I want is yours.
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    Aww, this was very very sweet Kirei. ;______; Your sunshine loves it, its the sweetest thing he's ever heard. *smile smile*

    I can see what you've told me about before within all the symbolism, and I have to say you did a phenomenal job in that aspect. Thank you so much for this lovely poem.

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    Denada mi sol. <3

    Tu eres en mi corazon para toda mi vida.

    *beso* *huggly*


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