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    Default Peaceful Night

    A poem I just wrote. It only took a couple minutes, so that's why it's off a bit. I apologize for all the rhyming, I was aiming to make a sweet poem. I hope everyone likes it ^^


    Peaceful Night

    Watching the moon and stars
    Feeling the peaceful breeze
    There are no sounds of cars
    Just the wind in the trees


    Laying on the grass
    Indentifying shapes in the sky
    Seeing Orion's belt
    I didn't even try


    The sky is so clear
    In the wonderful time
    Hold this memory dear
    As the time flows freely by


    The night is getting later
    The stars are shining bright
    But it's time to go
    And tell the sky goodnight

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Rhyming is not really my stlye but this poem is really good
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    Great job,i like how it ends smoothly^^

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    Thanks you two. ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Your poem is great! I love the organization and imagery.. it's beautiful. I think some lines could be improved on, but it has great potential.. it does a great job of creating a feeling to the audience.
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    WOW that poem can only be described with one word: AWESOMEE!! ^^



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    stuck by the name, this is a peaceful poem, i like it.

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    I really enjoyed this one! You ended it perfectly.


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    I'm glad it's liked o.o thank you for your comments everyone. ^^

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Paki paki paki! Good job


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