What do you think about this Japanese anime I made?

[死神じゃない]

Hi,

I made this video for my Japanese class presentation and was wondering what you guys think about it.
It is slightly inspired from some anime series I have seen (Death Note).

Episode 1
Episode 2

What do you think?

[TheThunderBringer]

Seems decent enough....but what about it is anime? Yeah it's in Japanese and stuff but...nevermind.

It's alright, you have a good enough accent I guess...

[Diocletian]

Not an anime nor interesting.

[Rulloxp]

I personally think its a nice way to express yourself, im sure over time you'll get a more interesting plot involved. Keep working at what you want to achieve and one day it will be accomplished,

[Gero50]

It is pretty good I can tell you really worked hard. The quality of the audio is a bit poor but still good. Nice work and I hope you got a good grade cause you sure deserve one.

[死神じゃない]

Thanks.

[Lily Rock]

Wow cool, my favorite game is Warcraft 3 all time(i had it from when i were 2-3 years old <3, i love it), but still, syncing and that, it's pretty cool.

[小美ドクロchan]

Oh gawd, major "super-polite high school Japanese class language" flashback. XD

I....can't really think of this as anime but you'll definitely get a good grade. My suggestion is if you want to do more of this kind of thing, put some...emotion into your dialogue. It's really...monotone.

[死神じゃない]

Thanks for the tips all. Yeah, the language being used is actually super polite which is unnatural (but that's all they taught us in the first class!).

Actually I submitted this presentation like over a year ago and I got an A =D
僕は今日本語４を取っているんだ。たくさん習っている。それから僕はこのビデオにちょっとはず かしい。

[小美ドクロchan]

Yeah, the language being used is actually super polite which is unnatural (but that's all they taught us in the first class!).

Same here. I never understood why, exactly....

[sa5m]

It's alright, you have a good enough accent I guess...

I think it's an automated voice talking. Is it?

[死神じゃない]

I think it's an automated voice talking. Is it?

No, its my real voice
Of course, I tried to make it sound cooler.

[Mr. Panda]

Wow cool, my favorite game is Warcraft 3 all time(i had it from when i were 2-3 years old <3, i love it), but still, syncing and that, it's pretty cool.

Either you're 11 or you don't realize that WC3 was made in 2002. o_o

[Syaoran]

One of your good points was the accent and stuff. I think this would be called a animated model of life? n_n Still good,
~DB

[Kaname Shikara]

It was alright ^^

[Hirasawa Yui]

well. either it's a copy paste of warcraft. otherwise the links is broken?..

[Lily Rock]

Wait, i am 13, i don't remember exactly when i had WC, but around when i was little, Medal of Honor and WC3, the first games i've played. ^^

[死神じゃない]

Wait, i am 13, i don't remember exactly when i had WC, but around when i was little, Medal of Honor and WC3, the first games i've played. ^^

WC3 was one of my favorite games too. Especially once I started making custom maps and playing them with others.


Everyone thanks for watching :-)
Oh and note that there is an episode 2, too.

Also feel free to post comments on the blog.
If enough people request for a new episode there I might make one when I have time. It will be with better Japanese grammar of course