Victoria From Hellsing Wally

[jumomo]

well ... i planned something like a door that light is coming from ... but that door only exists in my mind ... :P ... so dunno what to change else ... and dont worry nobody is rude or destroying any fantasy or whatever ... just tell me what you think

[wizz-o-matic]

Hm, better, but the non-burning one is better. The fire dosn't fit with the silver color of the cross.

[jumomo]

yeah i think so too ... looks really poor :P

[akachan]

yes, the not-burning, because I've never seen silver burning in all my life ^_^ ..
anyway would you do a silhouette( I think I've wrote it wrong.. ) of a gotic-window on the top of the cross? like she is in a church... I imagine so..

[jumomo]

like ... what ? (._.?)

[akachan]

ok, I'll try to do a screenshot ^_^

[jumomo]

hahaha thanks that would be very helpful

[akachan]

I hope this could help you :^_^:

[jumomo]

hmmm i think it will .... let me work on it

[akachan]

*bumps*ok :^_^:

[jumomo]

so here it is ... the new version ... but im now sure if it is better or not ... i tried a lot with that gothic window ... but nothings really fitted in there ... this now is best i could do ... have a look

[WinterC_16]

i think im begining to c wha ur trying to do, it needs something still, more windows but faded, idk, i think u wanted to keep it simple thoiugh so idk, must go think

[asher_aj_wei]

Looks much better. Here's what I think... The emboss on the cross is too much, way too much. Need to make it lesser so it looks like an actual cross. Don't forget to clean Victoria up too... I think you can still brighten her colours a little.
--> Edit: The shadow of the cross is not consistent with the actual cross. The cross horizontal bars are stretched out of the window but the shadow shows that the horizontal bars are shorter than the window...

[jumomo]

Originally posted by asher_aj_wei@Mar 1 2004, 05:46 AM
Looks much better. Here's what I think... The emboss on the cross is too much, way too much. Need to make it lesser so it looks like an actual cross. Don't forget to clean Victoria up too... I think you can still brighten her colours a little.
--> Edit: The shadow of the cross is not consistent with the actual cross. The cross horizontal bars are stretched out of the window but the shadow shows that the horizontal bars are shorter than the window...

yeah your right ... but think 3d .... the cross could be closer to the viewer than the window .... like this

|-------X----|
viewpoint window

[akachan]

:^_^: is more realistic
opinions:
I think it would be better if you put the cross on something(like an altar? or just a black rectangular thing)
and u can also put up the window(o put down the cross with the altar thing), I say this because in the proportion with the window the cross doesn't seem me like a big cross that stands on the floor, but seems a little cross over something.
if in your mind that cross is an huge one u can just make the window smaller(so the cross seems bigger.
Naturally if u want I can make a screenshot, my english isn't the best one u've ever seen :lol: :^_^: ''

[omicron_15]

the lighting is very messed up, it caint be coming from the door since the door is smaller then the cross yet you see the ends of the cross

maybe you could have energy/white light shooting out around the cross, i dont like the burning gross you have.

[jumomo]

Originally posted by akachan@Mar 1 2004, 02:19 PM
:^_^: is more realistic
opinions:
I think it would be better if you put the cross on something(like an altar? or just a black rectangular thing)
and u can also put up the window(o put down the cross with the altar thing), I say this because in the proportion with the window the cross doesn't seem me like a big cross that stands on the floor, but seems a little cross over something.
if in your mind that cross is an huge one u can just make the window smaller(so the cross seems bigger.
Naturally if u want I can make a screenshot, my english isn't the best one u've ever seen :lol: :^_^: ''

screenshots are always good make me understand better :P

[akachan]

ok maybe u'll have to wait a bit but( :lol: bit-but)I'll done it :^_^:

[akachan]

ok, this is the screen, hope it's useful :^_^:

[asher_aj_wei]

*Laugh*
You wrote everything out? You could use the type tool~ Unless you're using microsoft paint and didn't bother. But nice effort in trying to explain your point.
*chuckle*

[jumomo]

thanks a lot ! this is really helpful i will work on it !