To Be Continue....

[xgu1s3x]

I am cold and empty,
the word happiness doesn't exist in my world.
Suddenly, your face appears in my mind and,
tears spilled from eyes down my cheek,
I shut my eyes.
I bite down my tongue, so I won't yell out the agony within me
the yearning to vanish from this pathetic and unforgiving world
darkness surrounds me like a veil covering my eyes
love does not exist
it won't ever exist for me
my soul perished when you left me
my mind is full of anger and sadness
a small white light appears in front of my lifeless eyes,
I can't recognize this warm feeling
why am I also feeling this piercing pain inside my chest?
I clutch my chest tight, and I was beginning to feel the moisture of my tears sliding down my cheek,
I look up at the dark and sad night
stars start forming and shimmering.
I stand up and rise
trying to support my weight with my legs
mustering all my strength
the warm light begins to shine brighter, and it takes in the form of a boy.


Escribiendo todos mis sentimientos - writing out my feelings

[Anime Forum]

Was this created with the motive of it being poetry? I was just really confused, with pretty much the whole thing and especially the last line. The last line seems more like you ran out of ideas and popped that in. Is this a poem? Story?..

[xgu1s3x]

It's a poem..but I wasn't quite finished with it, that's the reason for the last line.

[Rulloxp]

That was very creative; even though it seems a bit gloomy, you wrote your feelings, which is good. I just hope you overcome whats bothering you (:

[Kaname Shikara]

It's really great that you wrote out your feelings and it made for an interesting poem. ^^