I'm in Control

[Sakura Holic]

And I asked myself, "What happened to the rest of me?"

My younger self that runs from danger
Never to take a step towards the hot spot.

"What happened to the girl that makes goofy smiles?"

Trying to be happy as much as possible
Nothing that stops her from turning them upside down.

"Where's that girl filled with innocence?"

Never to look at things the wrong way
Just followed along like there is nothing wrong.

"Where did that strong girl go?"

Where she used to stood up and walked on
So easily like nothing was wrong.

Where did this smart girl run off?
As her voice turns into something fake.
Her breath changed the flow of her words
And her words spat out ice.

The girl with brains that knows exactly what to do
With out hesitating and second thoughts.

Did she really drown?
And drown?
To the point where its darkness
That consumed her?
Gravity just trapping her?

I know that girl.
I know where she went.

That girl who I am now.
That girl who I am now.

With out bravery.
With out a goofy smile.
With out common sense.

I'm out.
She's in.
Trapped deeply with in.

She's dying.

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

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i like it but it is a bit confusin and the words to me don't flow properly. (sorry for the criticism) but otherwise i like it.

[Sakura Holic]

I dont like to rhyme with my poems at times if its not necessary. But thank you for the feedback! :]
It's basically telling the reader, what happened to the person's old self as one changes.

[alexshim]

"What happened to the girl that makes goofy smiles?"


"Where did that strong girl go?"


Where did this smart girl run off?

These reminded me of how i was before
amazing and awesome poem.

[Sakura Holic]

These reminded me of how i was before
amazing and awesome poem.

Haha. Thank you.

Isnt it funny at times when you happen to be in a situation where the you NOW can't seem to make a move to solve it where the you BEFORE knows exactly what to do with out knowing its the correct thing to do from the beginning?

I'm having a lot of those moments... It's like I'm talking to my sister...
Me: (Insert Name) is being really stupid [rants rants rants]
Sister: Ignore her....
Me: I cant! Shes like my old friend and [blah blah blah]
Sister: You know.... i'd just ignore her and just not be her friend anymore. Its not your fault.... Just dont talk to her anymore. I'm sure a lot of people told you the EXACT. SAME. THING.
Me: You're right.... You know... you remind me of my younger self.... I used to think the same thing when I was young....

(This is sad b/c my sister is 13! xD)

[alexshim]

Haha. Thank you.

Isnt it funny at times when you happen to be in a situation where the you NOW can't seem to make a move to solve it where the you BEFORE knows exactly what to do with out knowing its the correct thing to do from the beginning?

I'm having a lot of those moments... It's like I'm talking to my sister...
Me: (Insert Name) is being really stupid [rants rants rants]
Sister: Ignore her....
Me: I cant! Shes like my old friend and [blah blah blah]
Sister: You know.... i'd just ignore her and just not be her friend anymore. Its not your fault.... Just dont talk to her anymore. I'm sure a lot of people told you the EXACT. SAME. THING.
Me: You're right.... You know... you remind me of my younger self.... I used to think the same thing when I was young....

(This is sad b/c my sister is 13! xD)

At least your sister is one year older than me Haha isn't way too early for me too think like that but can't help it .
i agree with you totally.

[Sakura Holic]

It's still sad that even younger kids know what to do but older adults take it too hard and the problem just goes every where.... xD