Don't Think Of Dying

[Kaname Shikara]

A poem I just wrote for anyone who feels they should die, they need to realize they are wrong....and that there is truly much much to live for.

Don't Think Of Dying

Don't point a gun
Don't draw a knife
Don't use poison to stun
Just to end your life

Everything has meaning
In this hard life
Even though everything is leaning
To everything bad in your strife

Never give in
Never give up
That's when you let the devil win
And you shiver like a lost pup

Be nice to the people who care
Stay for them
Don't you even dare
To die from any limb

[Rulloxp]

Awh, thats really good. ^^ You pour your heart into your poetry; as well as another person's poem I just read. You have a meaning to your writting, your not just writting. You show passion, and care. Thats what to me, poetry is about. Good job, that may help many people for anyone who is actually concitering. That would mean a lot.. :P

[Kaname Shikara]

Thanks...this poem was very rushed...it was written in a few minutes. So I'm hoping it's ok and that it would help someone.

[Rulloxp]

Rushed or not, it was very sentimental. Is someone in trouble?! If so, the poem will definally help. Everyone deserves a chance, even in the hardest casescenarios. Everyone. Once they make it through it, they'll realize that they've made the right decision.

Aside that, the poem was great; and it was very meaningful. You don't have to worry about it being bad. Cause, its wonderful.^^ o.O

[Kaname Shikara]

Everything will be ok. ^^ Yes that is true, everyone deserves to live.

[Kirei Shijin]

Kirako! That was very good! The only thing I'd watch out for are the last two lines. Maybe take out the word "to" from the last line? I don't know.

Anyways, I really liked it. ^^

[Kaname Shikara]

Thank you Kirei ^^ I'm glad you liked it.

[knives1019]

That was very nice, right now I am going throug a hard spot in my life and this really helped me out and made me feel a little better about it. I thank you for posting it.

[Kaname Shikara]

@knives1019, I'm so glad it could help you ^^ and thanks

[knives1019]

I cant stop reading it. It really does help

[Kaname Shikara]

I'm so glad ^^

I hope it helped my new friend some >.<

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

That was very nice, right now I am going throug a hard spot in my life and this really helped me out and made me feel a little better about it. I thank you for posting it.

both you and me...but i guess that i'll never do it since my family has suffered to much strife and pain. i don't wanna cause any more. tnx though for the advice and kirei was right you do put your heart and soul into your poetry even if it was rushed ^_*

[Artcell]

Wow that was good sis!I liked it quite a lot!^^

[Kaname Shikara]

Thank you everyone ^^ I'm glad it turned out good and helped a couple of you.

[Anime Forum]

It may not seem like it, but I'm not always the jolly and fun loving person I seem to be around my friends and on here. I have some form of depression, and I do get suicidal thoughts sometimes, but I would never react on them, because that would be dumb and I wouldn't want to throw my life away. I can relate to this poem, I really liked it, nice job! : )

[Kaname Shikara]

Thanks Raiken >.< I hope it gets better for you.