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    Default Journey (my first freestyle)

    Ok here I tried my first Free style... Since I've always had the feeling I rhyme to much...

    Journey

    Death is dining on my table
    Whe're feasting on my soul
    We need a new man
    There's nothing left here

    The air I inhale poluted by society
    The air I exhale polution of the soul
    When every shape is losing it's charm
    When no one cares about a new dawn

    When the sun is back I'll be gone
    All has lost his it's glow
    When stress haunts your mind
    When you can't escape

    When you gaze up to the moon
    And when the drugs wil lit soon
    Is this the right path I'm walking
    This life need some reversion

    It's time to retrace my steps
    To go back where it all went wrong
    But would someone care about me now
    And as I'm down on my knees

    Praying to heaven to fall asleep
    For I am the one who hates his own kind
    A outcast that never was meant to last
    For I serve the language of failure and doubt

    Fortune has forgot my name
    What worth is life
    If it can be ended by a knife
    As I sail this cold sea called life

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    This was a good poem ^^ very good for your first free style too.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    audience stop in speech of awe....

    I am speechless toooo

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    Great poem. Goes to show you don't need to rhyme to make a good poem.

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