Dreams.

[Anime-Prince]

This poem probably makes no sense.

A world of icicles with no demise
Adventure on slopes with a slip and a slide
A cosmic beam multicoloured with surprise
Granting the occupants a place to hide

A tree of comfort brown in appearance
A worldwide book with little meaning
The transformation compels interference
On a poetic rhyme I find myself leaning

Because life shows reality when and how at will
But dreams pull you back to individuality
Our minds are leaky cups, hard to fill
Refreshing our urge to play defines vitality

Give me a swing or a boat setting sail
The pictures in our house show what could be
A dream takes away the fear to fail
Releases the desire to courageously be free

Bobbing alone our imaginative world
Searching for adventure and new found wonder
Treasure hunters, no, just a boy and a girl
Sky high swoops and sea diving under

So we escape to our stories and rhymes
And focus on fun like we used to
Climbing volcanoes and swinging through vines
At the top of the mountain will be me and you..

[Kaname Shikara]

I think you did a good job on it. It rhymed well and there is an interesting story to it. ^^

[Anime-Prince]

Thank you very much. Your too kind to me!

[Bugsiee]

Hy there, i really liked your poem, it has that sense of wonder the whole way through it, and thats what dreams do , they leave you wondering and in a daze, or urging for an adventure. Awsome poem!