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    Default True Darkness

    True Darkness
    SLowly drifting into nothingnes,
    Feeling the claws scraping against your legs,
    Seeing the darkness that already took your life,
    Hear the screaming of pain,
    Tasting the blood that crawls down your scalp,
    Smell the sulfur that is eating away at your life,
    Small little stories that stab you over and over again.
    In taking what is far too much,
    Slicing away from your own flesh and blood,
    Watching it kill what is left of your humanity.
    What is left to do?
    Where can you hide now?
    No more hiding,
    No more games,
    Fear what is coming,
    Fear all the flames,
    Crawl to the shelter,
    Hide away the shame,
    But he comes in the darkness
    Eating away your ways.
    Over and over
    Knowing what will happen,
    Feeling before it has happened,
    Drowning in your own punishment,
    Sawing away as you're going insane.
    He watches your speech,
    He follows your past,
    He knows what is true and what is a lie,
    He has your punishment written down,
    He wants to eat away your soul,
    Just know that true darkness isn't your home.
    Your sight ripped out,
    Your voice sliced apart,
    Your skin burned off,
    Your nose full of water,
    Your ears dripped with acid,
    Punishments for those who don't follow the law.
    Ease of life in which you may think is fine but really be that behind every wall there is someone trying to reach out to you. You'll never know if it is in a good way or bad way if you continue to run like that.

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    I'm at a lost for words, and truth be told, I'm a little shrunken into my seat. But do you really believe darkness is only this small amount of things? If so then I do hope you find some type of light. This is the first poem I've seen of yours on here, it is good, do keep writing, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    It is a good poem. Very very detailed and gory. I hope you're not feeling like this as well. Keep writing. ^^

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    Tis is a very dark poem! seems like something I would write! ^_^ well in my earlier years. I liked it it was detailed and it does seem like you to feel this way! and yes keep it up ^_^ even if its gory it is good.

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