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    Default The Perfect Breeze

    the breeze against my face, blowing ever so lightly
    as the breeze hits me, i begin to cool down
    the hot sun has been burning down on me for two hours
    and a perfect breeze comes by
    feeling the breeze against my face and body, i start to drown out my surroundings and daydream
    heat from the sun is disappearing and feeling nothing but the perfect breeze
    i begin to wonder if the breeze and the sun are fighting
    if they are, then why?
    the breeze was only soothing my sun burned skin and keeping me cool
    why is the sun jealous of the breeze?
    if the sun didn't smile and make the day feel like an oven, then the breeze wouldn't have jumped in
    the perfect breeze feels amazing on an oven filled day like this.
    stay true to yourself
    don't let someone drag you down and burn
    we are all unique in our own ways
    lets keep it that way

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    Hmm didn't sound like a poem to me. Sounded more like a thought. A nice thought though. Hey, if at first you don't succeed, try and try again ^^
    It's nice but it's not a poem. To ME that is. I'm not speaking for everyone. Feel free to disagree.

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    Good thought. I wonder that to sometimes!!
    In this world everything changes except good deeds and bad deeds; these follow you as the shadow follows the body.

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    It is a good thought ^^ I bet if it's polished it'll make an even better poem never give up writing, you could be one of the best on AF someday with practice.

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    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    i use imagery and things like that when i write and if you don't like it then fine i will not post anymore.
    stay true to yourself
    don't let someone drag you down and burn
    we are all unique in our own ways
    lets keep it that way

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