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    This poem is about someone who was betrayed by a friend they thought was a real friend but it turns out they were the opposite and it continually tears at their heart, making it so they can't smile genuinely unless with their true friends. I hope everyone likes it. ^^



    Betrayal



    All the things that you've been through could have been avoided
    If all you did was ignore that little nuisance who took and subsided
    They slinked away, unphased, just like it was nothing
    Of course, they didn't care about the happy days
    They just wanted you to feel the never ending pain

    They betrayed you, back-stabbed you, wrought your destruction
    To the extreme and made it so your heart was not pure
    Because of them, you never experience happiness anymore
    It's just a dream as it once came and is now gone
    But, the effects of this nightmare still linger on

    Nothing to do, nowhere to run, just sit in the shadows, there is no sun
    Your heart is dark and your mind is blank
    Your soul is sprung from the everlasting pain
    Despair takes over and you wonder why
    Your mind keeps drifting away to those horrible days

    Now, years later, real friends surround you
    They warm your heart and take away the despair
    These are true friends, who will stick by you all the way
    Always trying to cheer you up when your down
    You smile your best but the scar remains...

    You have to live with it, through the remainder of your days...
    Last edited by Kaname Shikara; 02-11-2010 at 03:15 AM.

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    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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    It was better than you gave yourself credit for. Free style in which allows teh emotions to spread out as well as you need them to do. It began with a quick squeeze of the heart, feeling as though sadness took over but ended in a slight happier tone by being able to feel your friends strength with you. It reminds me of someone I have recently met but I'd rather not mention his name in case he doesn't want the world to know. Keep writing, my friend, and give yourself more credit while in the creative process, never know who will like and who will love it. -_^
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    That is true ^^ thank you for your comment sis

    Amazing set by
    Ezza Obsuna ^^

    The days fly by and the feelings remain
    So far away and causing us pain
    That's okay we'll make it through
    Soon we'll get to say "I love you"



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