Appleseed wallpaper

[Magnus Red]

Hey everyone! About a year ago I submitted a few of my wallpapers, though none of them were accepted. I was taking a look at them today and figured I'd come back and maybe give it another shot.

Here's my Deunan wallpaper (from Appleseed 2) after removing some images that were cluttering it up, as per Serated's suggestion. What do you guys think? Submit-able, or do you have any advice?

[-Snowolf]

I personally would not use it. It looks like you took a background and threw a render on it. Sorry but that's my opinion.

-Sno

[Magnus Red]

Yeah... when you're right, you're right. lol.
Not sure what else I can do with that extraction. Guess I'll put it on the back burner for now. I've got a couple others I'm working on.

Thanks!

[alexshim]

It's actually awesome i say submit able totally.

[kglinoga]

I suggest that you change the background of the center of attraction in your wall paper. It seemed to be very redundant when yellow:yellow. Try to make it a black and put series of events from different episodes that can identify who is that center of attraction you are referring to.

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[Magnus Red]

Thanks for the advice, kglinoga.

I submitted it a while back for the heck of it, and it was just accepted, so I probably won't be making any more revisions of it (on that note, does anyone know how that works? Is it possible to try to submit a revised wallpaper to replace a previously accepted one?). But I'll keep your advice in mind for future designs.

Thanks again!

[Hypatia]

The blending is not that good nut other than that its okay!