7 days

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On Monday, I see your flowing hair behind you,

On Tuesday, I see your shining eyes piercing through,

On Wednesday, I hear your tender voice calling out,

On Thursday, I hear your sweet laughter ringing loud,

On Friday, I feel your soft skin as you hold hands with me,

On Saturday, I feel your hot breath coming on to me,

Its Sunday now and you're here in my arms,

I promise to love you and keep you safe from harm.

A week ago you weren't in my life,

Now I'll love you forever till the day i die.






The days of our lives....Each day is special. ^^

[Kirei Shijin]

I love it! This was very creative and romantic. You impress me more and more with every poem that you write.

[Kaname Shikara]

Great poem! It was so good and you put a lot of emotion into it when you were writing almost like something with my past before ^^; almost. Please keep writing poems I can't wait to see more

[poshyterra]

nice poem about how each day is special. so true. i like your writing. straighforward, complex, and interesting. really enjoyed this one here.

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Why thank you Kirei, Kira and Silver! ^^
Your words are still ringing in my heart.
Stay frosty!

[ultra_maniac]

ah I saw whole week in 7 minutes and such an amazing feeling wow.

“You can get awful famous in this country in seven days.”

“Seven days without laughter make one weak.”

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Hehe. Waalaikum salaam. ^^

[ultra_maniac]

assalam wa alaikum

[ELR]

*wipes away a tear* Simple and powerful. How in just a short amount of time something can change and it be a huge impact on your life. Continue to write, my friend, for I have read and I see great potential in your writing.

[*Tsuki*]

O_O Wow . . . that's one of the best I've read in a while.
Great job!

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Arigato ELR And Tsukiyaki!!
*gives ELR a tissue and Gobbles up Tsukiyaki* :x