Can't Escape It

[Kaname Shikara]

A poem I felt like writing. Hope everyone likes it ^^

Can't Escape It

Can't escape whats inside
All I want to do is hide
You've done enough! Time to reside
But you wont, you'll just bide
Until it comes to your next stride

I can't escape your wrath at all!
You love to watch me fall
Just like a lifeless doll
It matters not about your call
All I'd do is ignore it all

Nothing ever phases you
Your only hue
Is the ugliness in all you do
Every time you held me through
What I thought was bitterness to you

All you did was lie
I just sighed
I let it happen all the time
All I could do was cry
Every time I'd wonder why

All you would do was cheat
Every time you'd meet
Along with another girl to greet
You are a lowlife gone to meet
With your dreams of hence to cheat

You said you loved me...
You said I was wonderful...
You said we'd be together to forever...
You said you'd stay faithful...
Wow, such horrible lies I believed...

I hate you so
With everything I've got
I will never forget the torment
I can never escape you
You horrid, wretched, vile, beast

I wish I could despell you
To an ever lasting hell
So you could see
A more fitting end
As the horrible demon you really are

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Another great poem Kirako. I could feel it. I could feel the poem's emotions and message. I love it. It was very well written too ^^

[Kaname Shikara]

I didn't think I made this one as good as I could so it means a lot that you say that ^^ thank you

[Daken.]

Looks like you went from rhyming to not rhyming,
it was still enjoyable to read.
And everyone hates a cheater, lol.
I hope you didn't go through that.
[:

Love it, another great peice of work.

[Kirei Shijin]

Very nice!! Kind of reminds me of that "Letter to my ex" that I wrote lol. It was packed with emotion throughout! That last stanza is really powerful, I can feel the hate. As always, good job. ^^

[Kaname Shikara]

@ Novak Thank you and that's true lol. I went through this January 4th 2009, rather thats when it ended. I just can't let it go. Thank you for replying ^^

[Kaname Shikara]

@ Kirei Thank you I've been wanting to write something like this for some time and seeing your poem helped me force the words from my heart. ^^

[Kirei Shijin]

@ Kirei Thank you I've been wanting to write something like this for some time and seeing your poem helped me force the words from my heart. ^^

Good, I'm very glad to hear that!

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I read the poem again and i must say its really good! It isn't dull or monotonous. Like Novak said it went from rhyming to not rhyming. Which means
that you have talent. You can make poems that rhyme and ones that don't rhyme. To use it together in one poem and still pull it off is great!

[Kaname Shikara]

Thank you Night ^^