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    Gaara

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    Nicely done. Just please avoid lined paper! It takes away from some very nice drawings.

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    I can see you're a Naruto fan. :P I really like the Sasuke drawing. The expression fits him so well. I agree about the lined paper. Try to avoid that.

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    On the contrary, my friend, lined paper is very good!

    It helps you improve a lot. Due to the lines you can easily measure where the eyes, nose, mouth etc will be and you can plan your face a lot better. To practise, definitely use lined paper if you're not that good yet. Not, that I'm sayng you're bad. xD
    On the contrary, my friend, you drawings look superb.
    Allow me to elaborate:

    Your Gaara drawing:
    The eyes are too small, you should make them bigger. The thing that we recognize most about Gaara are his eyes, so don't be afraid to make them a bit bigger.
    The chin is a bit too far to the right, but aside from that, the facial structure is good. The cheeks are on the right height, nicely curved and well placed.
    The neck to shoulder transition was done fabulously. You have a nose for this! A lot of beginning artists unfortunately fail with this, but yours is not that bad, actually.

    Bakura:
    The hair is a mess, but who can blame you? Bakura has messy and hard to draw hair. You've made a nice attempt though. His neck is a bit too long and too muscular for my taste and compared to the original one, but this is your interpretation, so it's fine.
    The face however is a bit too stretched out, but again, it's your interpretation, so it's fine.
    However his cheekline is a bit too sharp. You should point it down a bit, because now his face is too sharp and it gives a a pretty unprofessional look to it.

    Ken:
    The Ken drawing is unfortunately the one that's the least best. The eyes are a tad too small, the pupils are looking in 2 different directions (I think?). The hair however is simple, but nice. The facial structure is pointed out correctly too.

    Sasuke:
    This in my opinion is the best of the 4. The face is nicely constructed and it looks 'right'. The eyes aren't too small or too big, his facial expression suits him and the hair is done nicely. Also, the neck to shoulder transition is nicely done here too.

    I'm not going to rate your drawings, but I must say there is room for improvement. Not that you suck, you're a good drawer as it is. Just keep on drawing and you'll find yourself becoming even better. Have you tried using a tutorial?
    Not everything is black and white like that.

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    I like your drawings.

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    Great drawings

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