On My Mind

[Simon Phoenix]

this was just on my mind


Flagrant Assasins Vaporize the Masses/
Bodies and Caskets Burn like Lava and Acid/
Masive Blasters of Plasma Reduce Souls to Ashes/
Gun Slingers and Slashers compete for the Earth's Destruction/
Corruption Confusses the Weak and the Helpless/
the Selfless fight for the Human Rights and Continued Production/
a Deduction of Freedom Leads to Dispair and Disaster/
a Conduction of war Led by Maestro's and Masters/

[ultra_maniac]

nice one i enjoyed it throughly plss make some more like those

[Kaname Shikara]

That is a nice one keep up the good work

[*Tsuki*]

Interesting . . .
Aside from the spelling errors,
it was fairly decent.

[SigmaSD]

It was okay but if you take your time you can develop it further. I kind of got to the rhythm at first but then afterward the rhythm just stopped and it sounded a bit weird.

[Simon Phoenix]

i don't know what word i spelled wrong >.>;,but thanx for the feed.

[Simon Phoenix]

o i spelled massive wrong lol