Loving you even still ..

[jackprw1]

Yeah,fine,you’ve got me
just mere minutes
thought it hasn’t been
because I haven’t tried
but at least
I didn’t make it known
yes,I’ll admit
but only to you
if you truly want to know
please try to understand
I’ve tried to stay away
tried so hard to clear my mind
I’ve done my best
so many times
I’ve tried to walk away
all the things you make me feel
but once again I’ve failed
for my heart beats so strong
so dont blame me
and forgive me
for loving you even still.

[Kirei Shijin]

I like your writing style. Short, sweet and to the point.
I didn't have any trouble understanding what you were trying so say.

[kisses2]

I really liked that one! It honestly is the perfect poem for something in my life at the moment. But anyways, i really enjoyed it. I recommend that you write more poems. (:

[ultra_maniac]

simply flawless perfect nothing everything is good this should have been at least one of the top 100 poems this year

[Kaname Shikara]

Good poem ^^ it is very easy to understand and the meaning gets across well.