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    Hrmm. I wrote this not too long ago. It is alright in my opinion, deffinately not my best work, but I havn't posted anything in a while, so, enjoy.

    Spinning in a pirouette of time
    Breaking through the endless lies
    Even though I think you mine
    We still hear the meaningless cries
    I Dance till my heart's decay
    Then watch it shatter among wraiths
    How did we become to betray?
    Was it every solitude mistake?
    I Dream with the Insane
    Though my thoughts are mine
    And even though I am not "sane"
    My whispers are a sullen crime
    Weaving a web of endless thoughts
    While banishing voices on contact
    Never again, I be distraught
    My mind is forever unwrapped
    Last edited by .Miki~; 12-28-2009 at 01:31 AM.

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    its good but somethings caught my eyes well you can add somethings in it small mistakes i ll say
    like you should have added *are*in between you and mine
    * Even though I think you mine*
    then endless thought of time that should have given the grace
    well over all it was very good just keep on writing
    ~ai~rox~

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    I liked it! It was nice. Keep writing poems and they'll get better and better! Good job. (:
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    I loooveee your word choices!
    The first phrase made me go, "omg, that sounds so cool." Lol.
    "I dream with the insane" is another one I love.

    I can't wait to see what else you create! :3

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    thank you so much... i enjoy the feedback =)

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