Naotavespaboys drawings

[naotavespaboy]

Hi. Firstly I would like to thank Poison Ivy, MissChelly, Mikadzuki and Kagomeasakura for all the help and support they have given me with regards to drawing. Thanks guysmyour help is greatly appreciated.

Well here are my drawings the first two are an old short story I wrote over a year ago (hence its shoddyness) It belonged to a set of short stories but I have lost most of the others (Oh well)

The second one is a character design from an epic I am rewriting called "Deepest Twilight". It is of Dark Mikayla. This is the same Mikayla from the short story. She looks different because I set Deepest Twilight 5 years sfter the short stories and Mikayla goes evil eventually.

I hope you like my drawings. Any thoghts, comments or critiques are welcome. Thanks

[kunoichi711]

OMG!! Your drawings are brill.
Keep them up!!

[CrimsonLumiere]

im happy that you made your own art thread so i already give you my comment last time just keep it up i know you can

[kenleungxp]

U post it!!
good job,good creative!
I love the last drawing=]

[poison.ivy]

Oh, dear Ray! I'm so happy you opened a new thread! You'll have my comment about the 1st two drawings when I finally manage to send you that e-mail >.< As for the last one, it looks great. I just LOVE her outfit. Great job with the wings. Just keep 'em coming! Great work <3

[IchigoKiss]

dude awesome drawings keep them up

[naotavespaboy]

Thanks guys. I'm currently working on some updates and will probably post a few.....

Kunoichi 711 - Thanks. I'll try to keep going!

KagomeAsakura - Thanks you've helped me out a lot already. Thanks for the support!

Kenleungxp - Cheers! Mikayla always seems to be fairly popular.

Ivy- Thanks sis. I still haven' got your email...... It must have got lost in the post...... Your support is greatly appreciated. Just keep drawing as well k.

Ichigokiss - Thankyou. I'll try to update as and when I can.

[naotavespaboy]

Update time. Here are the first 3 pages of another short that I wrote a long time ago. They are posted here in order. It was fifteen pages long but I have lost half of it. I will post the rest of it later and am in the process of redrawing the last 7 or so pages that I lost. Hopefully by the end of the April I should have posted the entire story here. Well any critiques or comments are welcome.

Enjoy!

[SuXrys]

You-have-talent. That's all I need to say! xD Keep it up! I cross my fingers that I will see more! ^_^

[poison.ivy]

Your background is gorgeous as always, dear bro. I don't even mind that elf's breasts thanks to your great backgrounds XD They're a bit skinny, but that's the only tiny mistake. I love their faces and clothes. I give you an 9/10! =D

[MissChelly]

I just go ga-ga over your detailing, always wonderful.

[naotavespaboy]

Thanks again......

SuXrys: You think so? I promise there is more. I will post it a later date though...... Watch this space!

Ivy: Thanks. As for Irianna I'm not best fond of her character design either.... I won't change her though. The reason shes like that is I wanted to draw an unattainable female character ( if that makes sense ). The reason for this is to counteract the unattainable nature of Grotlek. What I'm trying to say is Irianna a woman who the other male characters want but can't have loves Grotlek who because of his past will take no woman alive. I won't say anymore as all will become apparent later.......

MissChelly- Thanks You have supported me since day 1 along with Ivy. I am eternally grateful to both of you.

[CrimsonLumiere]

i like your newest update its good i wanna see more of your works ^^

[naotavespaboy]

Right a special update today. Normally I would only update once or twice a week but I finished this one last night so decided to post it early. I don't generally colour drawings as I really suck at it so this is a one off. A few weeks back I asked Ivy for colouring advice and she gladly gave it. Here is the result..... Its not great but it will do. This ones for you Ivy. Thankyou very much.

[SuXrys]

Right a special update today. Normally I would only update once or twice a week but I finished this one last night so decided to post it early. I don't generally colour drawings as I really suck at it so this is a one off. A few weeks back I asked Ivy for colouring advice and she gladly gave it. Here is the result..... Its not great but it will do. This ones for you Ivy. Thankyou very much.

Goodie that we received an update, and thank you for letting me know that. So kind of you!
The colour-advice seems to have been good becase I think that the colours are nice. The skin colour is the best according to my opinion, I myself seems always get something strange when I try to mix a realistic skin colour (just get some pink stuff instead of a decent skin colour >_<). Oh well. On a close up the hair also looks great. If I have to give you some (bad) criticism it would be the face. Now I dont know if its just your style of drawing but I dont know if I think that the face is so realistic done. I aim at the proportions. But else than that, wonderful! One question: the up-side-down moon on the forehead, is it Sailor Moon as the source of inspiration to it? ^.^
/SuXrys

[poison.ivy]

This ones for you Ivy. Thankyou very much.

O.o OMG There's my name!! This is so sweet, thanks, dear! You gotta be kidding me, it's beautiful! Can't decide what's better, hair, skin or clothes. Wonderful coloring and shading! I'm so glad my advice helped you. Dear God, it's great! I'm speechless (and if I'M speechless, that surely means something!) You should try coloring a page or two of your Manga... It would make it lively.

 

Thank you for dedicating it to me. It means a lot from a great artist like you <3

[CrimsonLumiere]

Wow its was really good big bro^^
good job

[shikamaruscutie]

awsome dude you rock man now i do know i have to work harder on my pics...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[naotavespaboy]

Wow thanks guys.

SuXrys:Thanks. She lost most of her facial details in the colouring and my initial pencil guidelines got covered over so I had to scratch do the details when it came to inking up. Some of the proportions got a little messed up in the redraw. As for the crescent moon no it wasn't inspired by sailor moon I've only seen a few episodes of that and wasn't that impressed with it. The inspiration for that came from Ah! My Goddess ( each of the girls have a different symbol on their forehead and cheeks.) I wanted Wren to look a bit mystic and that just seemed a good way to do it.

Ivy: Glad you like it. The advice helped a lot. I probably won't colour any of the manga though. The drawings are too small and delicate for colour and would lose a lot of the detail (that from the feedback I've received people seem to like so much). Plus I have never once drawn Grotlek or Mikayla in colour and honestly never thought what colour their livery would be! Also it would take a very long time to do. I may do some one off colour character designs though.

Ka- Chan. Thanks. Your support is also invaluable.

Shikamaruscutie: Thanks. Practice makes perfect. There are plenty of very good artists on this forum who will gladly help you improve. I too am still perfecting my techniques and honing my skills. Good luck to you.

[Villey]

Holy mother of God. They're really good.
Coloured one is just amazing.

[JJ46]

OMG, I love the cover, it's beautiful! I didn't know u could draw!! . The manga is a bit hard to read/follow though.

[naotavespaboy]

Thanks. I wasn't really expecting this much good reception....

Villey - Looks like our respect for each other is mutual. I really wasn't expecting a reaction like that off someone with your talents.

Darkmizusasuke - Not many people know I can draw. It took a long time for me to gather the courage to post these. Once again its nice to have mutual respect from someone with your talent

[naotavespaboy]

Time for an update. I've had a bit of trouble uploading these images so if they are too small or of low quality let me know and I will see what I can do to improve them. Here are pages 4 and 5 of the rainy fishing one in order. As always critques are welcome. Well enjoy!

[SuXrys]

Well I have to admit that I am having little troubles with wathing them, cant really see them all clear (but I can still see them fairly good).

From what I can see this far it seems to be good drawings. (You have a nice handwriting^.^ much better then mine btw). If I have to give you any criticism it would be that you are forgetting the shadows. If you are looking at the first picture for example, a shadow to the bottle would have made it all better. As a matter of fact, when I continue to look at the other "square's" the lack of shadows is rather obvious. So more shadows, thats the criticism I can give you. You are really good at drawing. Keep it up

[naotavespaboy]

Thanks for the review. Maybe in the future I will be able to use the computer for the words to replace my handwriting. For now though it seems to be doing the job. As for shadow without photoshop it is very difficult to shade these drawings. Each page is only A4 size so each frame is only a few inches big. Also if I mess up I will have to start all over again. I guess you could say I'm afraid of shading. Maybe if a practice more I will shade some in the future.