Wow your new ones are amazing, the border is perfect for the first and the text just fits perfectly, the other one is good but it can be improve by the border color because black is just black :S
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Wow your new ones are amazing, the border is perfect for the first and the text just fits perfectly, the other one is good but it can be improve by the border color because black is just black :S
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Last edited by Annie Hall; 12-12-2010 at 04:40 PM.
I <3 the second one. I think a few more splatters like you have in the background could help it too. I'm not such a big fan of the first one though.
Ahhhhhh, I like, I like.
I like the second one more..
Cause.. It's Takeru. -Dies.-
And it just.. Mixes better? I dunno. >_<
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Last edited by Annie Hall; 12-12-2010 at 04:41 PM.
D'aww I love the second one wolley , your so good.
Haha you even put "8.27.08" on it.
What a nice touch.
You sure have improved a lot.
Thanks!!! And yeah I couldn't think of anything else to put so I hi-jacked it from your signature at the time, lol.
Righhht Wolley, I'm just guna go ahead and CnC your last tag (The Daken one).
Right let me start of by saying overall the composition is well executed and the idea behind the tag is very well thought out. The biggest pro this is the text in the background which I believe says "Marlboro" as in the cigarette brand. This is well executed, as is the smoke coming off the focal (not sure if that came with the stock used).
However the main "Daken" text, I can see what you're going for here but the "aken" could do with being moved down and right a tad. becuase it looks a little condensed and tacky at the mo.
As for the focal itself it doesn't seem to blend with your background at all, I would suggest getting around soft round brush setting it to red and brushing over the left of the focal, set this to screen or linear light (or whatever the gimp equivalent may be)
Change these two things and I believe you'll be onto a simple winning Tag here.
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This was a very difficult theme, wouldn't you agree? I like it but it's really wide for me, you could also try to make it less bright and add more yellow but wuthout opacity but I'm not sure how that would work, also it's unbalanced so you can try adding something to the left but I'm not sure. ;~;
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I was actually incredibly happy with my entry ^-^. I understand it had technical difficulties, but I wouldn't change them, because I got what I wanted to with it
Thank you though, I do appreciate your opinion.
Try searching up textures in DeviantArt.com textures can be used to make your graphics more unique. Also try finding more interesting looking fonts.
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