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    Default Another Morning

    There’s nothing wrong to weep for
    No poets drum to beat for
    Just a wailing sun to sleep for
    As I lay cross the bed

    The echo dawnlight on the blinds
    Through its misty ageless climbs
    Begs my form in blankets twined
    And plays across my head

    But what words does this sun preach?
    With failing smile and no speech
    Just empty aching warmth and screech
    All blatant and untrue

    No messenger, no courier comes
    With fire-eyes and feet that run
    Just a whisp’ring wind a setting sun
    I close my eyes and go
    The tragedy of life comes not from pain, despair, sorrow, or even death; but the constant annihilating amnesia that begs us to forget we live.


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    Sounds like someone who doesn't see what the point of mornings are. Waiting for someone to come from which has an answer but ending up not having one. I enjoy your writing Lu, I hope to see more by you soon. ^_^ And keep up the good work you always seem to do.
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    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
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    It seems that you're not a morning person. Yeah some mornings tend to be like that, where you wake up and there is nothing to look forward to, and the only thing you can do is just lay there.

    I liked the elegance of the words and the calmness of the poem itself.

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    Seriously not a morning person. How about afternoon? xD

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    The poem had nice flow and I agree that your not much of a morning person but no worry I'm not either xD Not my favorite from you but it was good. Honestly I didn't like the first stanza too much but the rest of the poem helped it and overall would be a better than average set.
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    i like it..i have to be awake early there is no laying around for me i might miss the only bus that gets out on time..which would be bad..like sigmaSD pointed out it was a very calm poem.

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