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    Ok I think I need to do something with the color but I dont know what. any way tell me what you think. ant look at that building what can I do to get it to blur into the backround better. it sticks out to much.
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    I think your wall looks flat. Meaning that there's nothing that's outstanding... The whole wall doesn't seem to have a main focus - although I have seen walls that don't have any main focus but still looks fantastic. Unfortunately, this isn't one of those hehe ( not insulting, just that it's not there yet =D )... The extraction needs work... Look at her hair

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    i agree that it looks a bit flat. perhaps blurring the city would help. also, the edges of the character are jagged.

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    Oh, u have put an angelic vision in front of a overcrouded and poluted city.

    Other than that, I agree with others.

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    same as the others.

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    (Same thoughts). Try making everything in the background darker, and with less contrast (and those lights on that building that protrudes up are wierd.. maybe make it glow). And the angel over the polluted city- I guess that's wierd, but seeing something different isn't a bad thing.

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    my opinion it looks good, but yeah, it would look better if it was blurred in the back, but i dont really know how to do that

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    same as others, try monotone backgr or at least "remove" some colors so it doesnt look too flat

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    I did some work on it tell me what you think. also I just saw that white line on it, I will work on that the next time I work on this wall paper.
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    Good job, but you might want to make the character stand out a bit more, a shadow or a little outline maybe... Otherwise gj ^^

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    There is still too much contrast in the bg.
    And also the char is jagged.

    I'm not sure if u saw but on the left part the city seems cut of.

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