NANA - A little pain corrections

[Shimotsuki_No_MiNa]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/nana/alittlepain.htm


The english translation is ok, but there are some mistakes in the japanese transliteration

1st verse, 4th line:
tsuyoku naru tame wareta egao

should be

tsuyoku naru tame WASURETA egao

"tori modosu" below should be written "torimodosu" since it's a single verb


2nd verse, 3rd line:

omoide no naka no goto

should be

omoide no naka no KOTO


2nd refrain, 3rd line:

kaze ni hitori mayottemo

should be

kaze NI FUKARE hitori mayottemo


finally, the last refrain:

kitto kokoro wo tsunagu (...)

should be

kitto kokoro WA tsunagu (...)




I minght've missed sth

[AzureDark]

Have you done your own transliteration of this? If you have, post it, if you haven't nevermind.

[Shimotsuki_No_MiNa]

TRAVEL TO THE MOON
Kimi wa nemuri yume wo toku
Dare mo inai hoshi no hikari ayatsurinagara
Tsuyoku naru tame wasureta egao
Kitto futari nara torimodosu

Kizuite
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Ima to wa chigau mirai ga attemo
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Sakebitsuzukete
Kitto kokoro wa tsunagu ito wo tagutteru
Ano koro no watashi me wo samasu you ni
NO NEED TO CRY

TRAVEL IN SILENCE
Te wo nobaseba fureru no ni
Kimi wa tooi sore wa omoide no naka no koto
Koe ga kikoeru me wo tojireba
Chiisana itami sae itoshikute

Mitsumete
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Kaze ni fukare hitori mayottemo
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Sora wo miagete
Zutto kokoro wa te wo hirogete mamotteru
Ano koro no kimi ga furikaeru made
NO NEED TO CRY

(FEEL SOMETHING, FEEL NOTHING)
(LISTEN CLOSELY, LISTEN CLOSELY)
WIDE OPEN EARS
DISARM THE DREAM TICKLER
IN THE CONSTANT MOMENT
(YOU WILL FIND ME WHERE IT'S QUIET)
(LISTEN CLOSELY, LISTEN CLOSELY)
LET THE BLOOD FLOW
THROUGH ALL THE SPACES
OF THE UNIVERSE

Kizuite
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Ima to wa chigau mirai ga attemo
I'M HERE WAITING FOR YOU
Sakebitsuzukete
Kitto kokoro wa tsunagu ito wo tagutteru
Ano koro no watashi me wo samasu you ni
NO NEED TO CRY

(LISTEN CLOSELY, LISTEN CLOSELY)
(LISTEN CLOSELY, LISTEN CLOSELY)
(LISTEN CLOSELY, LISTEN CLOSELY)