I'm so perfect
I'm so pretty
All those lies
You told me
I must be crazy
It must be in my head
How could I believe
All those things you said
I've loved and I've cried
You've loved and you've lied
We're falling apart
It's tearing me apart
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I'm so perfect
I'm so pretty
All those lies
You told me
I must be crazy
It must be in my head
How could I believe
All those things you said
I've loved and I've cried
You've loved and you've lied
We're falling apart
It's tearing me apart
Not to shabby.... good try
You did great with your rhyming and it was an alright attempt, keep writing and I hope to see your improvement in the future, my friend.
I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
I am no more hated than I am loved.
And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
This is who I am.
~ELR
Its a pretty good poem, You could of added a little more to it, the ending sounds like there could be more to it.
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