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    Unhappy I'm So Perfect

    I'm so perfect
    I'm so pretty
    All those lies
    You told me

    I must be crazy
    It must be in my head
    How could I believe
    All those things you said

    I've loved and I've cried
    You've loved and you've lied
    We're falling apart
    It's tearing me apart

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    Not to shabby.... good try



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    You did great with your rhyming and it was an alright attempt, keep writing and I hope to see your improvement in the future, my friend.
    I am no more a rose than I am its thorns.
    No more a gentle breeze than I am the hailing storm.
    I am no more hated than I am loved.
    And I am no more heartfilled than I am heartless.
    This is who I am.
    ~ELR

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    Its a pretty good poem, You could of added a little more to it, the ending sounds like there could be more to it.

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