Requiem of Pain

[Miss Chola]

The sadness of tomorrow-
Do we feel today?
Hiding forever while
Everything fades to grey

The requiem of pain
A dark and lonely death
A gasp, a sigh
Wasting my last breath

I will never shed
A single tear
I welcome Death
There is no fear

[Star Gazer]

nice poem..

[IFS]

Ita a nice poem, but again it seems so sad that you feel so alone and that you welcome death.

[Anime Forum]

With all these sad poems, I am really starting to feel bad for you v..v.. Well anyways I didn't think it was your best poem to date but it was still better than average, nice job.

[CrystalAce]

Though it was a short poem, I loved your expression of words. It felt like a sad poem, though in the end, it felt like the poet had some courage to face one's ulitmate fate. So, I liked the way it ended.

Nice poem! Good job!