Is This Love?

[*Tsuki*]

okay, here's another poem I've written recently. I'm not really sure about this one, and I feel the end is weak, though I couldn't really think of anything else. Tell me what you think and suggestions. And as always, Thanks for reading, even more for replying. *Tsuki*
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Is This Love?

I'm so plain and simple,
not good enough for you.
But still you say you love me,
Is it okay to love you too?

I don't remember who I am,
cry without a reason.
But still you hold me in your arms,
and say that it's okay.

I forget I am not dreaming,
think you might be unreal too.
But still you stand here next to me,
will you always be there?

I don't believe I'm special,
just an ordinary girl.
But still you hold my hand in yours,
and say you always will.

Is this love I feel for you,
or just a dumb charrade?
Will it always be like this?
My questions remain unanswered . . .

[kajikun16]

great and nice poem of love good work

[*Tsuki*]

aww, thanks dad. ^.^ I'm still not that great with the whole "love" concept in poems, but I'm trying to work on it.

[TheDesertFox]

A very good poem and you've got the love concept down pretty good.

[*Tsuki*]

^^ thanks, that means a lot. ^^

[CrystalAce]

Really nice peom!
Though, I have to say, it feels a bit incomplete (or, maybe just the feeling to know more!)

Anyway, it seems you can write some really good romantic poem. Great Job !

[_-Midnight-_]

It has some good points and it is written well but i a not a fan of love

[polaris 北極星]

nice work

[Magical Soul]

Damn you did it again....Tears XD....I relate alot though.... Awesome...

[Zenga]

I think you have the whole love thing down if you came up with that! Good job!

[*Tsuki*]

oh, wow. =D thank you so much to everyone who replied! *bows* thanks a bunch! ^^

okay . . .

@lone_Sannin: I know what you mean, it did seem kind of incomplete, but I didn't really know what else to do . . . I maybe could have added a bit more to it, but I just couldn't think of anything. But, even still, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. ^^

@-Midnight-: *nods* I understand. I've never really been into the whole love sort of poems, but I think that sometimes it's best to have a little lighter mood. ^^

@polaris1: thanks :]

@Magical Soul: Thanks bro, I'm glad you always like my poems. As I've said before, it means a lot to me. I love hearing what people have to say about what I've written, whether it be good or otherwise. . . and, I'm glad you can relate to it. It seemed like it could work for someone feeling this way, and maybe that's why it's a bit off for me. I'm not sure why I wrote this poem, but it seemed like the right thing to do, if that makes any sense . . .

And finally,

@Zenga: I'm really glad you think so! I've tried hard to write love poems, but it never seemed to really work for me. I guess I was just waiting for it to pop into my head. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

wow, I'm just so happy to see all the replies this poem has gotten, and I seriously can't thank you guys enough for replying. I hope to make more poems you enjoy, and I'm always open to whatever you have to say. ^^ thanks again! hehe