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    okay, here's another poem I've written recently. I'm not really sure about this one, and I feel the end is weak, though I couldn't really think of anything else. Tell me what you think and suggestions. And as always, Thanks for reading, even more for replying. *Tsuki*
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    Is This Love?

    I'm so plain and simple,
    not good enough for you.
    But still you say you love me,
    Is it okay to love you too?

    I don't remember who I am,
    cry without a reason.
    But still you hold me in your arms,
    and say that it's okay.

    I forget I am not dreaming,
    think you might be unreal too.
    But still you stand here next to me,
    will you always be there?

    I don't believe I'm special,
    just an ordinary girl.
    But still you hold my hand in yours,
    and say you always will.

    Is this love I feel for you,
    or just a dumb charrade?
    Will it always be like this?
    My questions remain unanswered . . .


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    great and nice poem of love good work

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    aww, thanks dad. ^.^ I'm still not that great with the whole "love" concept in poems, but I'm trying to work on it.


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    A very good poem and you've got the love concept down pretty good.


    Your color is Black. You value power, ambition, and darkness. You love power at any cost, and are a corrupting influence on those around you. At your best, you are resourceful and unashamed. At your worst, you are parasitic and amoral. Your symbol is a skull. Your enemies are white and green

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    ^^ thanks, that means a lot. ^^


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    Really nice peom!
    Though, I have to say, it feels a bit incomplete (or, maybe just the feeling to know more!)

    Anyway, it seems you can write some really good romantic poem. Great Job !
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    It has some good points and it is written well but i a not a fan of love
    Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
    nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.

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    nice work
    in my head theres a greyhound station, where i send my thoughts to far off destinations.... so they may have a chance of finding a place, thats far more suited than here (ben gibbard)

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    Damn you did it again....Tears XD....I relate alot though.... Awesome...



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    I think you have the whole love thing down if you came up with that! Good job!

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    oh, wow. =D thank you so much to everyone who replied! *bows* thanks a bunch! ^^

    okay . . .

    @lone_Sannin: I know what you mean, it did seem kind of incomplete, but I didn't really know what else to do . . . I maybe could have added a bit more to it, but I just couldn't think of anything. But, even still, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. ^^

    @-Midnight-: *nods* I understand. I've never really been into the whole love sort of poems, but I think that sometimes it's best to have a little lighter mood. ^^

    @polaris1: thanks :]

    @Magical Soul: Thanks bro, I'm glad you always like my poems. As I've said before, it means a lot to me. I love hearing what people have to say about what I've written, whether it be good or otherwise. . . and, I'm glad you can relate to it. It seemed like it could work for someone feeling this way, and maybe that's why it's a bit off for me. I'm not sure why I wrote this poem, but it seemed like the right thing to do, if that makes any sense . . .

    And finally,

    @Zenga: I'm really glad you think so! I've tried hard to write love poems, but it never seemed to really work for me. I guess I was just waiting for it to pop into my head. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

    wow, I'm just so happy to see all the replies this poem has gotten, and I seriously can't thank you guys enough for replying. I hope to make more poems you enjoy, and I'm always open to whatever you have to say. ^^ thanks again! hehe


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