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    Default In the Forgotten Keep

    In the Forgotten Keep

    Somewhere deep inside chambers
    moist with gray walls, there is the Forgotten Keep
    Where the future is woven and foretold
    by those who have only seen the universe

    The Forgotten Keep is where
    those who have been spirited away go
    You can see their bodies and their bones
    erode away in the Forgotten Keep


    They say there is a cage there
    A cage in the Forgotten Keep
    that holds the earth inside it's golden bars
    They say it is protected by three wise woman
    with powers beyond humanity


    And they say in the Forgotten Keep
    there lies the king's son, a Future Weaver
    Weaving the futures he sees in his dreams
    into a pool of the empty and forgotten


    "There exist only three respectable beings: the priest, the warrior, the poet. To know, to kill, and to create."-Charles Baudelaire

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    *Nods* A very good poem.


    Your color is Black. You value power, ambition, and darkness. You love power at any cost, and are a corrupting influence on those around you. At your best, you are resourceful and unashamed. At your worst, you are parasitic and amoral. Your symbol is a skull. Your enemies are white and green

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    Thank you Desert Fox, I'm glad you liked it.


    "There exist only three respectable beings: the priest, the warrior, the poet. To know, to kill, and to create."-Charles Baudelaire

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    Glad you like it Polaris.


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    hey..! nice poem.. i really like it.. good job! *thumbs up*
    hope to read more from you.. ^^
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    Thank you. I'm glad you like it very well.


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    Hmmm...i was wondering how the poem might be , when i read the title.
    And it was really well made actually , i think the atmosphere you created in the poem was really well done , and most importantly i felt , it was different from other stuffs that i read.

    Nice job and keep posting your work.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    Glad you liked it Silent.


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    I'll admit, not the best I have seen but I enjoyed reading it =]

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    interesting. I haven't read a poem like this either, but I liked it, good job.


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    Thank you very much.


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    Very interesting. I thought it was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work
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    Thank you very much Lost.


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