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    Exclamation The Cursed One

    Began writing this thing in August 2008 or so...it's smth like a Fan Fiction composed of poems instead of chapters...

    The Cursed One


    One day or another, when I'll become a bother,

    Searching for my brother, that's lying next to me

    I will realise, that I must memorise,

    That I must keep inside, the answers from between.



    One day or another, when I will obtain the other

    It won't become a bother, a bother to forget.

    Forget the other, forget the brother,

    It won't become a bother, a bother to forget.



    One day or another, when I will find my brother,

    When I will find the other, when I won't be a bother

    When I will control my anger, when I will help the other

    You will become another, another curse to me.

    -------------------------


    The Letter



    The letter or the matter,
    The matter of the latter,
    Why does it even matter,
    If I lose that letter?


    The lesser thing than anger,
    The center with the dagger,
    Which dagger in the center,
    It's the bitter from the letter?


    The faster thing than ever,
    The hacker of the matter,
    Will see the letter
    But this doesn't matter.

    -----------------------

    croNous


    ~ part 1 ~

    Everywhere and nowhere, I'm looking there
    At all those things that I have to bear,
    A vivid light, searching from where
    The darkest voice that only I hear
    Tells me I shouldn't be here,
    And then it shouts into my ear
    "Kill your soul and die, my dear!"


    And it took me everywhere, starting from where
    The nature and the nightmare at which I glared
    The unsecured rasure started to revere
    While the rare rapture began to sere
    And the vampire started to fear
    Unaware of his own sphere, when settled the umpire
    Is he going to be free, or will he no longer be?

    ---------------------

    Wind's Road



    In the end, with no one near,
    The almighty has appeared
    Softly speaking into my ear:
    "You must now choose your road, my dear.

    Choose the left road over here,
    And the dark voices that you will hear
    The things that slightly disappeared,
    They'll make you kill yourself, my dear.

    Stay on the road where you are now,
    And things will continue to go how
    They did before, repeating and you know,
    Till the suicidal thought will start to grow,
    Devouring your soul till you'll be gone.

    But rise your head and look at right,
    There's your first path full of light;
    There's where your future can be bright
    The wind's road full of might.

    What do you choose? "

    "What I choose it's my choice,
    So wind, listen to my voice
    Listen to it as you always did
    And tell me what I should do.

    What should I do?
    "


    " To stay and not to stray,
    Because, as you saw today,
    After you realised yesterday
    And the day before it and so on.


    Your road is not the same
    The same with different names
    Come back to the origins,
    And even before that,

    Because when you come with us
    You have to stay with us
    Forever. "


    "Then so be it, as you say:
    Gone with the wind, on the Wind's Road
    In the places where I will grow,
    Fly with my wings, like I did before
    And I will stay on the good wind's side
    FOREVER. "

    ----------------------

    croNous

    ~ part 2 ~

    The voices are gone, and I can't get back home
    My friends are back, but nothing's on crack
    Not anymore, I just don't want it like before
    And so my gain, won't go like rain.
    While I opened the door, in search for more
    You locked it back, now I'm back on track.
    I want fear gone, I don't want home.


    Fear is still here, fear is still near
    It turns our hearts, into games of darts;
    When you two meet, or when you speak
    It makes you weak, when it's too deep.
    Covered in fear, afraid of losing someone dear
    Hiding behind masks, these are the real facts.
    Now on the inside, you must have realised:
    You want fear gone, or else you're done.

    ------------

    The Spark

    ~ part 1 ~

    He wanted to kill, that was his will
    To pay the bill, in order to fulfill
    In feeding his pill, unable to stay chill
    All this nonsense till, he felt down hill.
    Hurt, he got ill, sitting under a grill
    Running from his will, consumed by that pill.

    She wanted to stay, but maybe she may
    Have tried to say, that he can relay
    On her every day. No need to pay
    Or, to be at bay, because their way
    Is like running away, on a big highway
    But then you stay, and down you lay.

    He's an undead, and he's in my head
    When he was mad, I began seeing red;
    We wanted her dead, that's where it led
    Thoughts that were bad, stupid I could add
    She was so sad, while crying in bed...
    There's where it led; what was in my hea

    ------------

    Wrote this one on Friday, the 13 February...u know...Friday...13... x3

    croNous

    ~ part 3 ~


    I don't give a damn to know who I am,
    Or be like them: ashes against the grain
    To think the same and be lost in the rain
    I'm not like Kain or just another Lain.

    Do you think my resistance is in vain
    Just because this is your complex damn game?

    You already know that I don't need fame
    Or something else just in order to tame
    The ones that will not accept your true name
    Who will eventually destroy your game.

    Still think that my resistance is in vain
    Just because this is our complex damn game?


    You gave them fake roads then make them feel free
    And now all you want is to make them agree
    That they must help the other ones to see:
    In their illusions it's a hell to be.

    Do you think that I will let you use me
    And be a part of your entire scheme?


    You think I will regret defying you
    Because I will screw everything I do
    And then, with no more power to see through,
    I will suffer seeing my life's review.

    Still think I will allow you to use me
    And become something worse than a banshee?


    I don't give a damn to know who I am
    I've had enough of this stupid exam,
    I'm sick and tired to be their codemn
    I'm just bored and dissappointed by them.

    Can't you see I'm too bored of beeing Flame,
    And I'm too tired for your stupid game?


    ---

    Epilogue

    Edanai

    The land of wind and fire,
    There's my burning desire
    Connected like a fire
    The things that I admire.

    Edaian

    The fire are those who dare
    To be always at the height
    For the ones about they care,
    The lost light into the night.

    Enadai

    The wind's kingdom made of light
    Where the few ones see the sight,
    The cursed ones feel its almight
    As I once could in our fight.

    Enaiad

    You can see if I am right
    If you look into your heart,
    Find your spark into that park
    See the wind, the fire's bright.

    Edania

    That's my road to Ianade,
    I must leave Edania
    Cut all bonds with Enadai
    And leave behind Edanai.

    ---

    Feedback, smth? x3
    The wind is my strenght.

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    hey! nice poems!
    i like the "wind's road"..
    i got so carried away reading it..
    its a very nice poem.. good job! *thumbs up*
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    +.+.***whew***, nice poems.+.+
    +.+.and i like the first poem.+.+
    +.+."the cursed one".+.+

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    Now thats what i call a trail of poems. And whoa , all were really well imagined. I can a lot of hard work here.
    I like all the poems honestly.
    Good job.
    Keep posting your poems.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
    ^___^

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    Umm . . . Wow. I like the images in your poems, but sometimes it felt like you were getting off track to try and rhyme. Just saying. Good job though, and keep writing. ^_^


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    Wow, that sure did take me a long time.

    They are all nice so thumbs up on all of them.

    Make sure to keep up the good work =]
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    Nice poems
    keep'em coming

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