Can't you be my cure ?

[Howling Star]

Can't you be my cure ?

Like I've broken every bone
Like i've fractured my heart
And I feel so alone
Everyone left me right at the start

Bones piercing trough my lungs
My body is falling apart I have no construction
Yet we speak and use our tongues
Like weapons of mass destruction

My liver dead by all the beer
Cause your not here
I miss you more then anything
It's you to what I cling

Still living but half dead
It's so sad
I'm holding out for you
Yet theres nothin you would do

Can't you be my cure ?

[John Watson]

Your poems have alot of emotion in them, thats what makes it interesting. Really nice work.

[Anime Forum]

Another nice poem, keep it up.

[*Tsuki*]

Oh, how sad. Nice imagery. I liked it. Again. ^_^

[SigmaSD]

It's just so poetic how you gave physical description to your emotional ailments. I really liked that.

I have to say that the second stanza was simply the best. So full of imagery and a lot of emotions. I hope you find your cure soon.