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    Default Can't you be my cure ?

    Can't you be my cure ?

    Like I've broken every bone
    Like i've fractured my heart
    And I feel so alone
    Everyone left me right at the start

    Bones piercing trough my lungs
    My body is falling apart I have no construction
    Yet we speak and use our tongues
    Like weapons of mass destruction

    My liver dead by all the beer
    Cause your not here
    I miss you more then anything
    It's you to what I cling

    Still living but half dead
    It's so sad
    I'm holding out for you
    Yet theres nothin you would do

    Can't you be my cure ?

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    Your poems have alot of emotion in them, thats what makes it interesting. Really nice work.

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    Another nice poem, keep it up.
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    Oh, how sad. Nice imagery. I liked it. Again. ^_^


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    It's just so poetic how you gave physical description to your emotional ailments. I really liked that.

    I have to say that the second stanza was simply the best. So full of imagery and a lot of emotions. I hope you find your cure soon.

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