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    Default Of War And It's Bloodshed

    Of war and it's bloodshed far too much we know
    Let's hear it for peace and for all a fair go
    Nationalism, Religion, Patriotism and Culture only seem to divide
    And war leaders declare we have God on our side.

    For centuries of war wisdom we do not show
    The war supposed to end all wars ended decades ago
    Yet at the war memorial the last post is still played
    And for the returned war heroes there is one more parade.

    War only cause heartbreak the facts never lie
    And every day in war zones more people do die
    And even every war winner in human lives pay the cost
    And victory cannot taste sweet with so many lives lost.

    This latest so called war on terror based only on fear
    So many evil people from the propagandists we hear
    But it takes two to fight and two wrongs never make a right
    And the egotistical war men one can say not that bright

    I wrote this after a friend died fighting in Afghanistan.
    Last edited by Fabala; 02-08-2009 at 09:18 PM.

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    You give a history lesson without telling what happened and who was in it and when it was, it also tells how you feel. Keep writing your feelings out, friend.
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    Thank you Blacwick i will keep writing.

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    Each of your line had a message to give out , which made me think. Really nice.
    Hope to see more of your work.
    wish me luck for furture guys!!!!
    Thanks for everything!!!
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    Its a really good poem, its speaks out loud and its got alot to say

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    You can learn a lot from a short poem, and you proved that here. You did a pretty good job on this, keep writing more =]

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    WAR IS BAD! Although your poem is lovely~♥

    "They didn't need to tell eachother. They never needed to tell eachother."



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    Your poem does a great job in showing that no matter how many wars we fight, we never learn and continue to start wars at the cost of so many lives.
    Keep up the good writing.


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    Wow thank you all for your comments

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    I like your poem because it points out the fact that each side think they are right when they couldn't be more wrong.And I'm sorry for what happened your friend.

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