Smile

[.Miki~]

so this is like the only happy poem in the bottomless pit of poetry in my bookbag, so enjoy (meh 100th post)

I love it wheen he looks at me
eyes are shining blue
I love it when he says my name
like I don't have a clue
I love it when he holds me tight
so dreams are happy in bliss
I loved it when he touched my lips
and gave me my first kiss
I love when he comes over at night
and hope he stays a while
But most of all I love one thing,
his beautiful, wonderful smile!

[Anime Forum]

Congrats on 100 posts =]

Anyways, another good poem. Not as good as some of the others, but still very grand to read.

Rating - 8/10

[.Miki~]

yeah, ^.^;; not so good on the happy poetry... but i tried..

[SigmaSD]

It had kind of a cute childish rhythm to it, so I thought that added more cuteness to your poem. I thought it was an okay poem, but I've seen you do better. Just continue to write more and you'll get better.

[Infinita]

I liked it. The rhyming was good and I loved the story being told. Cute! ^^

[Rein*]

it had a kind of innocence to it, very cutesy.it was nice; rhyming and kinda sing songy.

[*Tsuki*]

^^ mmhmm, cute.

[ZukaxxMimozu]

I liked it! I'm the only dude I know that's likes poetry(I'm not gay)

[Kawairashii hikari]

I liked it, though it does remind you of a kiddy poem it's still cute!!

[Sailor Mystery]

You did really good!

[.Miki~]

it was supposed to have a cutsey side to it, I thought it would be fun, but its the only one I have written like it, so I dont expect to write more in its nature... Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate them.

[ZukaxxMimozu]

it was supposed to have a cutsey side to it, I thought it would be fun, but its the only one I have written like it, so I dont expect to write more in its nature... Thank you all for your comments, I appreciate them.

Sure, anytime