Last Days

[Dr. Evil]

Last Days

Darkness coming in from all corners,
Eating the light,
Creating more darkness.

Black taking over the world,
Devouring the sky,
Everything fading from crimson red to black.

The darkness is coming to consume the soul,
Taking over your mind and spirit,
Making you commit unspeakable evil.

The light has faded away,
Leaving only an empty abyss,
That nothing can destroy.

As stealthy as death,
The world is engulfed in dark, burning flames,
That consumes this rock.

It’s gone forever,
All that’s left are stars,
And the all consuming darkness.

This is my first poem on AF so I hope you like.
Give feedback!

[*Tsuki*]

wow, that's . . . interesting.
I don't know how I feel about it.
It was hard for me to read, and maybe the second line should be "eating through the light"?
I don't know.
In the ending, I thought of the night sky because you said stars.

[CutexKitten]

I just thought it was decent =[ sowwy. I know you can do better and now seeing all these poems, I really can't wait til I begin writing poems again. Good work though.