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    Default Who I Am

    I am who I am
    And that's all I can be
    If I wasn't who I am
    Than I wouldn't be me

    "Obviously" you might say
    But in today's world
    People try to be someone else
    Each and every day

    And so I differentiate
    From my human kin
    It's not the right way to settle
    Until you've explored
    Outside and within

    And all around you there is a world
    With so many people and places
    So many different faces
    And facets of their emotional grind

    Believe me when I say
    That love is a powerful way,
    A forceful wind that sways
    All that hinders it's ride

    The world all around us,
    The faces I have seen and
    The sights to me so keen
    This fire shines with such gleam
    Because inside I love it all so

    Why else would I question
    Each and every single dimension
    Around and about inside and out
    This world I have mentioned?

    I have held true love and lost
    But I haven't lost my thoughts
    I cherish every memory as it is.

    These times really show just,
    How a person can grow and
    It makes me want to know
    Much more then ever now

    I am the wind across the world
    And the leaves from the trees,
    Every single emotion inside all
    Gathered in a cup of tea

    You can see me with your eyes
    You can touch me with your mind
    You can feel all the edges
    Which create these reflections-
    in my rhymes

    I am the fire that rages hot,
    Yet the ice waters so cold
    I am the ancient grove of trees
    Lost in the times of old

    I am the sharp blade shining,
    In the clear blue sky,
    I am the sound of angels flying
    Yet the sand in the Earth so dry

    I am the words, the whispers
    Phantom in the night,
    Where moonlight sighs upon the rise
    Of shouting voices in the right,
    And from the left a choir
    The song of St. Katherine howling
    Gathering this essence bounding
    To the quintessential rounding
    That equals chaos and the void

    I am who I am
    And that's all I can be
    If I wasn't who I am
    Than I couldn't be me
    Last edited by Tetsanosuke; 11-20-2008 at 05:20 PM.


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    It was so good I read it twice, I like these humble upbeat poems.

    You misspelled "memory" in stanza 8 line 3, if that bothers you.



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    Thanks for pointing that out. I've been using this poem on my myspace, and I thought I'd see what others think about how I describe myself. A friend of mine agrees that this poem describes me. x3


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    That was really really really good.
    The last 2 stanzas were the best.
    We really like the first 2 sentances of the second to last stanza. It was deep.


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    Amazing as usual my dear brother. =)
    I love reading your poetry. <3 Lol.
    It makes me feel.. I don't know, but yeah. It's a good thing. I will tell you that. XD
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    I thought it was amazing. You flowed into the poem really well, and the rest had a soft flow. You made it rhyme without destroying the basic structure. Well done. (Others focus too much on rhyming, and end up destroying their work).

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