@Middy: You are right about the avatars being stretched, aha /amateur.
This was going to be a button for YYA but when I shrunk it after making it, it looked blurry and un-readable, so I'm just gonna post it here as a fail smudge sig.
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@Middy: You are right about the avatars being stretched, aha /amateur.
This was going to be a button for YYA but when I shrunk it after making it, it looked blurry and un-readable, so I'm just gonna post it here as a fail smudge sig.
I really like your "fail smudge sig" the colors are so vibrant, and while it's not the best you've ever done, it's not really bad either, I love it personally.
@Middy: Aha, yeah, totally failed as a button. Thank you <3
@Wolley: Why thank you. I guess I called it a fail smudge sig mostly because it took about 13 layers and I didn't feel like I put much into it. Aha.
Lost against Maru in the BOTM. My first "space" siggy. I did make everything from scratch which I was proud of, but I it was hard to make it a good composition. (I didn't make the map of the Earth though, I sort of just cut it into a circle lol)
SOTW entry from a while back
What does one have to do to get some feedback ;;
Worked on some smudging.
Last edited by Jagan Eye; 02-25-2010 at 09:09 PM.
okay sure I'll comment
I'll start with your latest.
To be perfectly honest, it's not that great. The smudging look sloppy and there is no balance in the signature. The left side of it looks okay, but boring and the right side looks really sloppy, especially the bottom corner.
One other thing... the colours really aren't working, there is no real contrast in colours, it looks kind of bland.
Also I think you could have done lots more with it, the left side looks pretty empty and I see no depth in the entire signature.
Your BOTM sig looks pretty decent actually, the space features look pretty and the whole thing just works.
The is a balance, which you created by text on one side and a "tail" on the other. I think I like the colours the most in this, there is a subtle repetition of colours, creating a nice colour palette. It's a real nice tag, even though the earth looks more like a button than a planet
Your MidnightRider sig, almost everything in this tag seems right, it has some depth issues, but nothing really serious. I think the left side looks a bit too sharp in some places, but that is only apparent, because the bottom is dark and the top is lighter.
all in all some nice tags :]
Roy Mustang:
Hm-hrm... it's not too appealing to me at first glance...the colors are quite dead D: I can't find much depth since there's no much contrast as well.
But somehow the colors do seem to match the raging emotion, so I would suggest re-creating this signature. Use some more stronger colors and some of the faded colors you used on the current mustang signature to emphasize that raging effect.
It has potential, I have a feeling this might be one of your best smudge sigs soon :D
@Uru: Thank you sooooo much for such a long response. It really means a lot. Though, the smudging is really hard to do on a laptop, but I'll try to be less sloppy. So I've gotten rid of a lot of the layers in my Roy sig and I'm working on editing it right now so thanks for the tips, they are really helping. <3
@Famahama: Aha, yay for comment. I see what you mean. I'm gonna be working on making everything a lot more vibrant and do a little better with my smudging.
Still being edited version. Any thing I should add or get rid of?
And to give myself a break from Roy, I did an Ed and Al sig, only it sucks really really badly. I couldn't get any colors right or anything. This is supposed to be for you, Jose, but I don't think its good at all.
To be honest, I actually liked the original version of your Roy Mustang sig. |: It was a little messy on the bottom right, but I actually liked the lightness in the background. With the one you're working with, I don't like how the background is so dark. But if you plan on editing it more and adding a little more to it, then that would be nice. Maybe I'm just not as picky as other people. xD;
As for Edward and Alphonse sig. It's not too bad. It doesn't seem to be one of your best, but all in all it's not so bad. Maybe if you add a little more to it and a little less splatter. My preference out of the two is the first one. I like the colors more. |:...Also, it kind of looks like al wet himself. xD
I'm sorry my comments aren't as helpful as others. I just thought I'd give my opinion. Anyways, I'd really like to see more~ I saw some of the sigs you posted earlier and they're gorgeous. *u*
╰ ADORABLE SIG BY RAMS, MY BESTIE! THANK YOU! ╯
MY BELOVED FAMILY: KIRAKO SHIMA, KARAS, KAWAII_AI, RAMS, SAKURAFOX512
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have fun
@Hakuchuumu: Thanks for your comment. It was actually quite helpful and it means a lot to get comments. I'm glad you like my sigs.
@Uru: Thanks so much :3
New sig, I'm kind of still working on. Everything (besides the Hiei stock) was done from scratch.
Lacks lighting. Take a look at the neck. The colors there change dramatically form a really bright color to dark colors. So balance that out with a lighting effect somewhere. Maybe something FIERY.
What's the stuff over his hand at the bottom? I dont think it looks right, use the hand to your advantage, or just suppress it completely with blending or more flow.
Sigs from Scratch are winrar.
@Sera: Thank you very much. The original stock had all that red stuff over the hand and I tried to make it blend better, but still having trouble with that. And something fiery, got it. I'll be updating this one soon.
Just a simple signature. Extraction credit: Serated.
Oh my, I'm loving all your sigs..><...every single one of them
They are so vibrant and lively. xD Kudos~!
I'm at a loss when it comes to anything graphic design related..@_@ So complicated. I wish I had your talent lol
Again, these are beautiful sigs~
MoonLight & Vines [*Sig by my dear Sis Lissy*]
Your signatures completely outstanding and stand out!
*Especially the FMA ones*
The Katy Perry sigs are especially beautiful!]
Your works show your experience and pure effort!
Keep showing AF your mesmeric works!
Last edited by UrusaiSevera; 06-23-2010 at 02:33 PM.
Not my fave from you Jaggy. >: It seems a bit too simple and lacking. I think if the effects were more solid it would do it good :3
ein, zwei, drei, vier bin endlich weg von Dir
fünf, sechs, sieben, acht Du hast jetzt keine Macht
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Edit: My thread has been reopened.
@Mystic Entity: Thank you so much! If you want to get into signature making, just start out with some tutorials and you'll be fine.
@Paprika: Aha, thanks that means quite a lot :3
@Aiacos: I know, I know >< I was following a beginner tutorial for this gfx school I'm doing and I didn't take any liberties of my own.
Request from Kiss of Death:
Last edited by Jagan Eye; 06-23-2010 at 11:15 AM.
Hey there. :3
The Hiei sig has a lot of great effects; and if I remember correctly from your last thread, this one was entirely made from scratch, right? That's amazing! The only thing I would recommend is to add a light source. I know it's a WIP; I just thought I'd mention it. :)
The sig for KoD is great, too! I really like the text and clipping mask circles. The only thing I don't really care for is the black covering up the left side. There's nothing wrong with it there; it's just not in my taste, I guess.
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! now, i need avatar... but it's great! wow...
Onew by Ωmega"If my joy brings you happiness, I am thankful"
@Cotaku: Aha thank you, I will put a light source on it once I decide to pick that signature up again. And yeah, the black on the side actually looks a lot better then what was originally there, so I just went with it, though its not something I typically do.
@KoD: Well I'm glad you liked it, I've PMed you the avatar.
Just some C4D placement practice, nothing special. Saber was vectored by Serated.
I really like your latest! Especially the text! I'm a sucker for good-looking, simple text. ;D
I don't care for the sudden change in background, though. It just seems like either the C4D or the gold should continue to the other side of her a little bit.
As for the C4D, I think you did a great job placing it. It looks really nice there.
I guess that's all I really have to say about this one. Nice job! :D
I love Trey's signature Jagan - the Kanji background is amazing!!
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